I just stumbled onto your story, and I’m thoroughly enjoying it. As a hardcore Kanera fan, I really appreciate the last scene in chapter 6. I think you’ve captured the affection and hesitancy well!

It had been so long since I had read this, I had to go back and re-read the previous chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see where it goes.

I actually want to know what will happen next. With the Ghost running on fumes and Ezra injured and unable to use the force, things aren’t looking so good for our favorite space family.

Well done. The intrigue is mounting, but I assume that the group Ezra has encountered are Saw Garrera’s Partisans?

Due to formatting problems your last chapter is plagued with code making it difficult to read the story.

Some dialogs are funny. Generaly good for now, but chapter 3 have format issue - imposible to read :(

Um... Hi! I am going to go out on a limb and say you didn't check your copy and pasted chapter before uploading it. There's a bit of an error in the chapter that comes from doing that. Reuploading and posting should fix it. Can't wait to read it!

I think this chapter is "long lost"

Ooh! I'm curious now...this is very well written, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Keep writing!

No issues with the canon so far. Grammar wise, Kanan's thought should begin a new paragraph, but it's an intriguing start.

You have a smooth writing and I like the environment you established.
I look forward for your update.

Intrigued. You write very well.

Great job on your first fanfic! I'm also new at the fanfiction arena too. I've posted three chapters of a story called "Rex's Camping Trip". It's just a family fluff story that I based on camping with my family as a child. As you can see, I am a Zeb fan.