I really like this, how you used the rain as such a strong metaphor, and how you showed this seemingly-insignificant moment as being one of Seto's most character-defining moments of change. Great job. :)

I really like this lil' story. Its really cool. V

That was adorable... the dog shit comment made me giggle... *cough* Yeah, anyway, the last sentence made me smile. All three of these weather-ficlets are really nice.

Hmm... What's with this precipitation fetish? Ah, no matter. 'Nother good one.

I love it! You portrayed Seto's personality perfectly, well, before he became all mean and ruthless.

Nice. It's very Seto-more emptional and less cold than he will be in a few years, but that fits. His attitude towards Gozaburo is dead-on, I think-seeing the man as a tool, already dehumanizing him.

I like the hints at the future between the lines. Good work, Sam. *grin*

You are one great writer. This was I liked it a lot. Whatever point you were trying to get across.I think it came through really well.

I loved the way you made him sound still like a his defiance there.

Please continue this!

I adore sad Seto fics. Awesome job! Thanks for writing it.