This is a good story, I like the idea of you nerfing Nartuo, though I still think you didn’t need to nerf him to the point his chakra is as low as a Genin, a Chunin level would have probably worked better since while he still wouldn’t be able to use the Rasengan, he still would have more energy. Also I would suggest giving him Harrenhal or the old stones in the future. Also you should try and give his armies special armor designs from LOTR or something.

Thunder fire u for not completing it

Yeah the stupidity of having Naruto with no Chakra is so stupid I don't were to even begin with this. Naruto with no Chakra an OC.

update please

Naruto needs to get used to dying. nice chapter.

update please

interesting

Great story and great potential
Just proof read it
Keep updating
Thank you

some spelling and grammar errors but interesting idea

Are you gonna continue this? It's awesome. Well to me it'll be sweetened if you give Naruto the goken taijutsu style.

Nice start.

Everything seems pretty good so far in my opinion.

My only advice is to try and keep it as believable as possible, since u already nerfed Naruto its ok to not have him level cities or stuff like that. Just keep him as you made him right now, in terms of strength agility and stamina there's no person or white walker who could fight Naruto 1 v 1. So keep in mind if you wish to have him even more powerful. I'd advise against it.

If you want more exposure add Naruto into the tag for the story! Otherwise a good start.

I like this story... so far it seems well tought out... but please don't make this a harem fic...

Good start, keep it up. But please space out your paragraphs it's very hard to read the story when it's just a large block of text. Please update soon!