This was very good, I love it all the way through. Kind of makes me wish for a sequel, but you said you weren't interested in that. Oh well.

I'm super late on this one but this was really awesome. I can't say much more than that. Definitely in my top 50 fics I've read.

LMAO THAT CHAPTER NAME. I was thinking of how to praise your work then I went and read back previous reviews. Surprised when I noticed the common theme of a chapter 2.

Hahaha nice one.

Anyway this is the first fanfic I've seen with such an amazing ending for Shirou in Avalon with Arturia. Reading and imagining Avalon through your description was amazing. The idea of Shirou and Arturia sleeping through eternity together in Avalon seems like the most sensible idea as it would feel too boring after a bit. But that's probably only my adolescent mind since I have no girlfriend hehe.

Another beautiful story by you! I'm literally reading through all your previous works right now!

I loved it!

When i finished reading this (and i did that in one sitting nearly without interruption) my fist and second thoughts were about a continuation and that this is a massive as all hell one-shot compared to others. Than i read the AN. Huh. Welp. Good thinking i guess... (sulking in a corner).

This has been the best I've read in the past few years

*bites into a pillow to hold back my fanboyish scream*
*cries now that I realize there isn't a chapter 2!*
This, this was so good! Like dude! I can't begin to criticism this! It was beautiful how both saber confronted alter and at the end alter realized her folly. It was equally beautiful to have levi/faulos die with excalibur even piercing solomon's ring (take that!)! But one of the most touching was when EMIYA was thanked by mash. Fujimaru also got his chance to shine (and that would be one of my complaints for fgo, how there seems to be such an emphasis on the master but seriously, there isn't much he can fucking do) by doing what saber said, observe and plan and empower (basically act as support).
There is so much more i wish to praise, how olga had a somewhat happy ending while staying true and having her dead, heck even if she did die that was a beautiful way to go and she could have gone off with a smile and bravely facing forwards. Inspiring really. But then in a true shirou fashion he has to point out the obvious when no one else was paying attention and irritate everyone. Fucking love it.
Seriously! Can we get some omakes where they show up in chadlea and socialize or eat or something. I would love for everyone (like the Knights of the round table) to be like 'so... is he our king or queen' in response to shirou, cause if a woman can be king why cant a man be queen (lol).
Again, I LOVED IT!

I loved this. So much. You don't even know.

I would like to point out that it's not EEXXAAALLIBBUUURRR!
ITS EEEXXCCCAAAALLLLIIIBBBAAAAAAAA! XP

tHIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME! THIS A EPIC!

I'd certainly want a sequel to this. especially a one where the theme is the 6th singularity, camelot. imagine how saber and shirou would react to rhongomiyad and the path that artoria has taken. i'd really like to see such a fic.

Also i'd like to mention that you really did justice to the character of olga-marie. i really didn't like it that she got taken out way early in the story in fgo (both the game and the ova.) and that we didn't get to see much of her personality, but this wraps it up really nicely.

I'd really like to see a sequel to this where all these characters are now present, including olga-marie, EMIYA and the our resident OTP shiro and artoria. how i'd like to see other saber face's reactions when they see those two. :')

I definitely wouldn't mind seeing sequels to this story.

It's actually kind of accurate that Shirou's hair would revert back to red anyway, having had Avalon implanted in him/being literally in Avalon and being near saber would thoroughly heal all ailments and rejuvenate the bodies cells, and his white hair/tan skin were caused by him pushing his circuits and magecraft too far which burned his body from the inside. Therefore, he would have lightened a couple shades too, although he might retain some of his tan because some of it is bound to actually be "sun-tanned" in comparison to the "burn-tanned" skin.

That was darn amazing. Thanks for being such a great author and sharing your fanfic with us!

That was good, chapter name hilarious. I will move on.