Lol well this was a mess. I like for characters to have some flaws, but Etta seems to have nothing but flaws. And it's funny that while explaining what she knows she still fits in criticisms about Bella and edward. Calling Bella a stupid and boring bitch lol, what does that make Etta then? She has fucked up so much worse than Bella ever did at this point in the story, I honestly don't feel sorry for her. Each chapter is now a question of how else will she fuck up and what else will she freak out about? I know you didn't mean for it to be like this but I consider this story a overdramatic parody/crack fic and I like it. It's almost a breath of fresh air compared to all the Mary sue fics.

I just stumbled across your little gem of a story by stalking other authors favourites and I’m glad I did. Great story idea as I haven’t read too many others like it. I really enjoy your OC personality and feel for Etta and her situation she is in. You have a great writing style that really grips you and draws you in so deep that I almost had an anxiety attack along with Etta. You had my heart going good for a few chapters there but I also thank you for the laughs along through it too. Well done and I do hope that you continue as I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes

I really like this and I really hope it isn’t abandoned :)

Who is Ed? Did you mean Et?

hope there will be a next chapter

Wow! I really hope you are still updating this story! I really want to know how things continue. Loved what I read so far!

ho-ly *shit* dude. this story is awesome
i feel so much for alice here

Verywell written story, am loving it so far

If she tells Rosalie her secret she would believe her...and kill here

I really can't wait for more pls update soon

Hell, t's an impressive thing, that's ever happened to me in me life exactly this week(week has been rich)I'm not even joking, you has an amazing sense to telling stories: I could feel her humility and determination and courage, fear and panic, real emotions and real thinking since the first chapter ,
It didn't feel fake. And I especially want to say what I like how you build her story on our own time.
You know, I really was worried about Loretta Jane. I don't think I did either. I have to say,planning moving towards a panic and disorder was fascinating. Everything she did was so human. Etta made me feel alive. I've felt alive. It was funny and it was ridiculous in the best sense of the word.
I love the way you explore second childhood and forced intimacy, closeness of parents. I'm thinking that's interesting. Human psychology of one more life, predators and the like.I wonder what she's not really into that kind of Powers That Be not like vampire.
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This chapter was in third person not Edwards POV

Love this fic. Just started it today. Hope you finish/come back soon. Thanks for writing. Cheers.

Sorry guys defending Rosalie, I understand. But the fuck when she wants is a bitch . I have no patience would have already told her to fuck a lot. If I already have my death scheduled Probably not, but I'm still not at all acceptable when someone keeps insulting me and telling me to fuck. I love the story, but Etta is proving to be very confused in these last chapters. I should have told you everything and played the fuck for the Cullens, they're proving to be a bunch of still please

Etta She is amazing! Her personality is strong and well determined love it.