still not a fan of the idiot stick the characters constantly get whacked with to make lee more useful. he does EVERYTHING and it makes his team pretty much useless, which means there is something wrong here.

great

OOhoho... that is interesting. I got a really big Iron Man feel from PanPan's obsession with multiple suits.

I really like this chapter. Amy putting on the suit is just awkward enough, the spar is well written and that ending promises some beautiful shenanigans.
Thank you for sharing this.

suprised Vejovis didn't immediately know the other suits were for everyone else. I mean she was eluding to that.

Interesting. I am a bit curious as to what happened at the end with Vista’s powers.

Woop! I love this story! :D

So is Aisha dead? I kind of hope not and I keep thinking of that strange darkness building in the zones might be where she is.

Thanks for the chapter! I wish Tattle would just calm down already.

nice

I love how horribly acrid you made Tattletale, good job on this chapter

Aight time to get our boy laid good thing he’s got a council to plan his orgy

Really good all-round though. It's clearly not a 'PR department polished' novel, and occasionally I can see 'the author' instead of what I'm supposed to, but... Know what, I'll just stop. I like it. It builds, it does what it needs to, and it...

Just... Great work. I mean it.

... You have no idea how scarily close to ME Lee feels. One or two 'not quite right' occasions, but I've never 'completely' been able to say 'no... I wouldn't.'

Honestly terrifying - to say the least. Especially considering I'm only 18.

...

Oi Abaddon, could you hurry your schedule along a few years?

Yay! Thank you for continuing to keep me entertained with your wonderful writing! I hope you're doing well!