i don't understand why Char would mark Jasper like that. did she try to make him her mate also? did Jasper know what she was doing? Char is stupid if she doesn't run every time Bella is near. after all, Bella IS letting her live!

great story, I really liked Bella and her friends but she had bad luck with such a terrible mate, Jasper didn't deserved her at all and if it was't for destiny crap he wouldn't have had a chance

Loved the story. Thank you for writing this.

This was a fantastic read well done

An amazing and one of a kind story!

I still can't believe what Charlotte could have been thinking od when she did that to Bella. She was supposed to be her best friend and sister, not another Alice.

Bella as a badass! Love it! Perfect for Jasper. Thanks for sharing

I don't know how I missed this last time I went through your stuff but I'm glad I found it. I love a badass Bella, she's got snark down to an art form.

I think I'd ask to be polite, but it's kind of the ultimate compliment for someone to do a fic based on another fanfic. I'd think they'd be thrilled.

A very nice story with a great hea. Love Bella and Jasper together. Thank you for sharing.

You are always so precise in your writing, it's so amazing and I love it you leave no stone upturned so to speak and leave nothing unsaid. I love it and I really love your stories...thanks hon...huggs. Peggy

Fantastic story. I adored all of it it was amazing to read like so many stories on . Readers are just blessed with authors you spend the time and focus to read and beta and do all of the work to produce a fantastic story to escape into. Thank you for your words and thank you for sharing them with us. Meg

so Alice had everyone fooled, including me! lol. I liked the look into the future and it's kinda given me an idea for my one fic.

nice second chance he got. as much as I hate to say it, killing Alice now just doesn't seem like justice anymore. I wouldn't free her of course,but killing her while she has no idea why? rose is an idiot and I'm glad to see Emmett taking control

you reap what you sow as they say. shouldn't had lied for so long. Alice going stark raving mad is hilarious. it's almost a penance in itself