this is sad and chilling. Azula's characterization of pretty accurate and her emotions feel real. makes me wonder how the show would turn out without Zuko. would Iroh have turned against Ozai faster if he remembered watching his brother kill his own son? And would he be able to ascend the throne after Ozai's defeat?

Shiiiiiiiiiiiii
I mean, daaaaaaammmmm
I mean, how, why, like...
Yeah I’ll have to agree with Adrimore on this one. Was NOT ready for that ending. Bloody brilliant, as always.
The best,
-FB10716

Wow this was a great story but even for Azula and at that age, I don't suppose she would reach that way given that she was never violent but will strike as necessary to achieve her goals and Zuko's death actually surprised me

Your summary hooked me, and the rest of this did not disappoint. The way you get inside Azula's head is eery, but spot on!

this was so good, you really wrote azula spot on! she's such a hard character to write, you really are a great writer

Well you had me fooled. Azula was spot on. I've read zero other words of yours (sorry!) but I found these 4000 to be brilliant in flow and characterization. I could see all of these events aligning with the canon Agni Kai, but the divergence at the end was quite chilling.

so the thing about this fic is that even though i've read revenant something like 5 times, the moment we find out zuko dies? it still jolted me. like, it was genuinely shocking, somehow, really nice. also i love this written from azula's perspective. 10/10

This was so good!
And how did you manage to write Azula? For real. I've tried so many times. But it's just so hard to keep her not ooc!