Reviews for Goldenflower 3: The Last Return
Sunnysofia16 chapter 17 . 12/27/2019
Dear writer.
I just love your Goldenflower stories. And i loved this out of nowhere chapter. It was a beautiful chapter and a beautiful ending. I hope you will continue this chapter a bit more and make your own story based on the narnia chronicler. Again I love your story. Keep writing.
Sincerely Sunnysofia16
Rebekka chapter 7 . 11/21/2019
Looking forward for more! Am I the only one wondering who the stranger in chapter 6 was? He knew her name!
vampdiaries5698 chapter 15 . 11/13/2019
Um yeah hi please please can you finish this?! I wanna see if we ever find out what happened to Andrew, and if she stays or not and what happens with her a Tristine. Please can you finish it out, you're almost done!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/6/2019
Love IT! Can’t wait for more! Wondering what kind of ending your story will have.
Number1brat chapter 9 . 8/23/2018
Love! Love! Love! I've spent the past two days just reading all your goldenflower books and I really love them. Cornelias character is so real and I love the relationships you've set up with every character. I can't wait for the next part
EdmundPevensie for evermore chapter 9 . 8/12/2018
Yay! Your back! Sorry I don’t review much... I love this story though! This chapter was great! I’m actually about go back and reread this series from the beginning! Cheers!
Speaking-the-truth16 chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
If you can see what's happening in the world today, since it's all over and the problems are only getting worse, just know that these are the end times; the days Jesus warned about. He gave us signs to look for which can be found in Matthew 24 in the bible and told us to watch. To not let these times come upon you unaware.

Understand that the rapture is at hand and can happen any moment. The day of the Lord is coming like a thief in the night and you do not want to be left behind.

When I reach out to people I encourage them to come out of this world and to seek the father in heaven while he may be found since 1 John 2:17 tells us in the Word of God aka the bible:

"The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever."

A lot of popular anime, games, movies, books, music and etc is of the devil. You don't want to be indulging in something that has no place in the kingdom of God since that will put your soul at risk. 1 John 2:15-17 and James 4:4 is important to remember since we can't be holding hands with the world and Jesus. These holidays & traditions a lot of us were brought up on has nothing to do with our father in heaven, is of the world and is only a distraction; please don't get caught up with it.

Realize that fiction by definition is "invention or fabrication as opposed to fact" along with other definitions out there and you want to be careful. I use to be a fanfic writer myself but I gave up a lot of things because a lot of it was related or connected to the world.

There is nothing wrong with writing but when you're writing about worldly things or fabricating stuff, you're putting yourself in danger since we're to walk in truth. Liars won't inherit the kingdom of God so you want to make sure you're speaking truth at all times.

Jesus told us at John 14:23-24 that if you love him then you'd obey his teaching. He also says at John 14:15 that if you love him then to keep his commandments.

I'd get away from fan fiction altogether, since it's only a distraction, and build a strong relationship with Jesus Christ since it's very important but that's a decision you will have to make for yourself.

Just know that all the issues going on in the world has already been foretold in the bible.

If you are awake and aware to everything going on, then please: seek the father in heaven while he may be found, repent of your sins, let go of this world and follow Jesus as mentioned at Matthew 10:37-38; majority of the things we need to know is in the Word of God so please read the bible for yourself. You don't want to be deceived since a lot of churches out there aren't doing what they should be doing.

Be aware that there isn't much time left but don't adopt the spirit of fear since greater is he that is in you than he who is in the world. You need faith since without it, it's impossible to please the father in heaven so never let the devil steal that or your peace. Just draw close to the father in heaven and he will draw close to you.

We've all fallen short so nobody is better than anybody and the heavenly father is very merciful. Just humble yourself, go to the father in prayer, confess your sins to him and repent. Mean what you say & repent (turn away or stop doing it) and he will forgive you.

Jehovah is the god of Abraham, Issac and Jacob but nobody comes to the father but through the son Jesus Christ so you want to accept and follow him since it's by his blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven.

A great deception is coming along with the antichrist and you do not want to take the mark of the beast. It's a chip that goes in your right hand or forehead. You can read about this in Revelation. Do not take this Mark, worship the beast or his image because if you do then you will end up in hell. Stay strong in Jesus. Only he can save us and he is a lot closer than people realize so be ready at all times and keep the faith.
Halfofit chapter 4 . 1/4/2018
Loved Tristane's introduction. He seems to be one for dramatic entrances. Keep writing. I like the story so far.
EdmundPevensie for evermore chapter 1 . 10/5/2017
Yayyyy! Your back! So excited! I enjoyed this chapter! It was a nice opener and truthfully refreshing! Look forward to reading more! Update soon!