I really enjoyed this, but seriously, sort out your were, we're and where. You keep using the wrong ones, same for your and you're as well as there, their and they're.

Telekinesis too? Awesome.

I love how you've expanded on Adam.

Aversion to aspirin? If she is a little timelord, I like the subtle hints.

I robots, “Well it worked didn’t it?!”

I don't understand how and why 11 was in this. Firstly he would have been with Amy at the time but it would have been a different time from when he went and met Sophie and also Sophie was in London but when he met Amy she was in leadworth which is meant to be in Gloucestershire which is no where near London. I just don't get why he'd hop from seeing Amy then going back to see Sophie in a totally different place. And really what was the point in that conversation he had with her? Then at the end when he said go be fantastic he's not at all making it obvious to Sophie who he's is. You know since he says that to her all the time :/. And finally how did Sophie not get a vision when she touched 11? Oh and you are still doing the writing were as where thing so obviously it's not accidental like I thought it was.

Why does Rose always comment when sophie is being 'sassy'? It's kinda boring when she says it all the time she doesn't need to comment on it every single time Sophie says something that is slightly sarcastic. I don't know maybe you just love using the word but it's getting too predictable now.

I'm not sure if you're doing it on purpose or accidentally but every time you use the word were you keep writing where instead. But I'm just guessing its a typo.

"I can siphon off some of the pain… block the receptors really"

What does 'siphon' mean because all i know is that it's some kind of tube but that's not right in the context you wrote it in.

Really good start the only thing is when rose says to sohpie are you from the other side of town it isn't right. Rose is from London which is a city not a town.

OOOOOH THAT THE JUST REGENERATED 11 ISN'T THAT SOPHIE IS TALKING TO ISN'T?!

Waaaaaaaait... Is Sophie the Master's/Koschei's child? It's just a wild guess but unless she's his sister I can't think of another reason why he would hold the key or answers for her.

Loved this! Cant wait to start the next one!

Yes! 10th Doctor...
I love 10...
Don’t get me wrong, I love 9...
But 10 is just... ugh, I just love David Tennant way too much, so much so that it’s scary
But anyway, I love the character of Sophie, can’t wait to see what happens next...
Ok so now I’ll just shut up and start reading the next one...
SO EXCITED!

I've enjoyed Sophie's character. You've done a nice job integrating her. Often an OC is just given lines/actions that were once the Doctor's or original companion's, but she's different. Very interested in the mystery around her. And I think the romance has been believable.