Reviews for Zero no Gamers
Marshall Cross Marian chapter 5 . 7/19
I like the story and all u hope for author-san to continue and update the story it was indeed good a well executed and well thought story. Keep up the good work sir.
Yusuke Rizuno chapter 5 . 4/10
Hello there! I just found this fanfic and its quite good actually, a few bit of mistakes here and there but nothing that way too bad. Hope you can keep up with it as writing in English will help you improve it and it has the potential to be great.
0vrLrd71 chapter 3 . 3/9
y'know that's a plot hole, his stomach wouldn't grunble like that... hais, what authors do for the plot
0vrLrd71 chapter 1 . 3/9
wait, canon charactors are already quite strong and you boosted them up? like wth but alright... oh and objects and people other than him, unless there on him, I think, can't go to throught the portal
OechsnerC chapter 5 . 3/2
I really can’t wait for next chapter. Just found your story and love it.
MasterXMaster chapter 5 . 2/13
Thank you for the new chapter. I'm not a native English speaker so I understand the difficulties writing in another language, don't worry write and have fun doing it.
Corruptedquotes chapter 5 . 2/11
It was nice to see an update from u finally, I've been waiting since your last update looking forward to your next chapter!
Lord of Moons chapter 1 . 2/7
The gamer ability has no limits. You can exceed human limits and do the impossible. It even warps space and creates dimensional storage. Jee Han also combines abilities together. As long as it exists in that world, the gamer let's you learn it from reading a skill book. Sure Saito couldn't just meditate and learn magic like Jee Han, but if he consumes books from the library not only will he remember it perfectly he can use the skill with textbook ease.
Gung chapter 5 . 2/6
I really don't like Saito learning magic. This is a thing that really annoys me about gamer stories. The Power is supposed to make your life like a game. But games have rules and most gamer stories ignore this. The reason why the protagonist in the original gamer manwha could learn magic was because in that setting everyone could learn magic it was not a perk of the gamer abilitiy. The gamer ability only helped him to learn it quicker like in a game. So if you are in a setting where magic doesn't exist you shouldN#t be able to learn magic even with the gamer. In world of warcraft (which is a videogame duh) if you choose the warrior class you can never learn magic no matter how many levels you have.
If Familiar of Zero where a video game than Saito would clearly be a Fighter class and therefore shouldN't be able to learn magic. (he could learn like warrior abilities like "charge", "great slash" or similiar though)

If I were writing this I would make it that Louise also gets the gamer Power (either through party system or just because they are connected through the familiar bond). Then you could have Louise learn magic and do like a magic INT build, while you keep Saito with a warrior STR/STA build. With neither of them being a "can do everything" mary sue. Best of both worlds.
tetsujinvinalay chapter 5 . 2/6
IT'S ALIVE! Good thing this story isn't dead like several other Gamer fics out there
Fatbastard21 chapter 1 . 2/5
check PM
GunBlade2020 chapter 5 . 2/5
Hi there

There are a lot of gamer types out there, you just have to stick to one.

Keep up the great writing!
NinjaFang1331 chapter 5 . 2/5
Excellent update and thank you for continuing the story
Echonic chapter 5 . 2/5
I never actually expected an update, but it's appreciated none the less.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2018
Pathetic, not really but, it’s not so good currently.
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