It's been While.

Spicy

Damn.
This sum good stuff

PLS CONTINUE IT

So uh,
Spelling check...

Replace the v in Dave with z. Daze.

lol

I thought for a moment that he had killed Jackie.
So he killed the other guy and not Jackie?
Because I was scared like hell with the thought of Marco killing Jackie.

RIP HIS LEG OFF MARCO!
I KNOW YOU CAN DO IT!
(I bet the moment she starts lactating that Marco will want a taste. XD)

When Star gets pregnant.

Run as far away as you can, Toffee.

MeWbErTy HeArTs!

MEWBERTY!

pleas write more

I'm honestly pretty stunned how wholesome and lewd this story is turning out to be. Quite honestly, It is impressive and overall a good read. Although, I think I actually enjoy the wholesome parts more than I do with the lewd stuff (Not saying it's bad or anything), but seeing these two grow as a couple and individuals really feels good, even if, in my opinion, it happened a little too quickly.

Gotta say as this is the first MonStar story I've ever read so far, I really enjoy the adaptation. Surprisingly, I feel Star is still Star for the most part with added bonuses (Yes, tails are awesome). Toffee being a good person was jarring to me at first, but I quickly grew over it. I don't think I'm jumping the Toffee and Moon ship anytime soon, but they are cute together in this story.

I'm honestly not surprised Janna was included the way she was in this story. Always glad to see she gets some just desserts - so to speak - as she is one of my favorite characters. Unsure about Jackie though, but hopefully her characterization in this story will be interesting.

Overall, I really like your story and eagerly await the next chapter. :P

ocome on write more chapter

Dude, I’ll fight off your other fic characters while you keep writing this gem, make it a little bit fair