Dude, the sparring match with Achilles was from one of Anakulmos14 or however you spell his name

Nevermind

I don't know if you know this but when u pair people, they are not supposed to die unless they come back from the dead. And i feel like u were reading Son of Vesta Demon of New Rome while writing chapter 4. Be original. This is among the worst fanfics I've ever read.

i don't get it is he a son of Pluto or Vesta

what ever happened to Thalia?

How didn't they notice Percy wasn't human and why hasn't his demi god ability developed and why doesn't his dad or Hestia know where he is

My dude! Dope story, one of the best ones on this entire site, has to be in my top five. You get my respect for actually finishing the story with a good ending. 50/10 would read all over again. Peace and Respect

Amazing, really amazing! Too bad all great things must come to an end. Nice job, although you should do another story with crossover to Arrow, Flash, and all the different universes and have a goal to be the kind of them all. Anyways, Great job! And congratulations on finishing the story. You did better than most people on fanfiction. I was kind of surprised with the lack of reviews. But nonetheless, keep it up!

The fight with the legionaries is also basically the exact same a son of vesta. Seriously, it feels gross to read this knowing you probably ripped others work for what "your" idea.

The entire fight scene is a slight edit from titan of the hunt. Idk if you got permission but it's just not that good having already read basically this exact thing but better.

Is Gwen coming back D:, I'm really hoping so.

Awwww, no extreme torture? No blood? No vengeance served in a cold platter with a side of steaming hot pile of shit? In disappointed and dissatisfied. I rate this chapter a 0.5 out of 10

Has there really only been 2 comments here... oh well.
First of all, thanks for the read. It's rare to see a crossover that developped. Maybe Percy os OOC but this is an AU and it is within reason of the story so good job woth that. It could be noce to see the follow up in the flash univrerse of maybe even Justice league or Young justice.
I hope youll go one of those 3 ways!

Cool story

this is awsome:)