Overall interesting story, the writing style looks a bit childish, but i think It Will grow a lot once you start to make more your own descriptions, dialogues and battles. I personally advice also much more ocs, especially enemies, and the tecniques from the Tome of battle. Good work and happy new year.

Please update soon

LOL! XD can't wait for more!
I give you thumbs up.

hahaha i loves this chapter, it's really great how toriko is so surprised i cant wait to see what happens with the galala gator and with the other heavenly kings xxx

While this story is going nicely, I recommend to check for spelling mistakes. I hope to see an update soon~