Reviews for May it Be |
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mcp19 chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 me encantaaa! sabes donde puedo encontrar mas fics de esta pareja? |
SilentRaven8 chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 The way you write smut is ridiculous, I just can’t even. It can be playful or frenzied, it all makes me squeal. Something about the way you write Gabriel though where he knows Michael likes it rough and he pushes her just enough, ah god sexy as hell. Really appealing. I am sort of mixing your other stories with this comment because he’s not particularly rough here but anyways thank you! Sometimes you read a one shot smut story and it falls flat because the writer doesn’t ground the story in any emotion, so there’s no connection for the reader. But here, I feel the connection :) |
wereworldsurvivor chapter 1 . 1/19/2018 LOVED this! |
wolfen281 chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 It is your duty to the newly formed hottest ship from Discovery to continue this series of one shots. I love your use of language in this story. I have a soft spot for authors who call a cock a cock. Dont sugar coatit...wait a second ;) |
vintage1983 chapter 1 . 12/1/2017 Sorry I read this ages ago and didn't leave a review. Definitely did enjoy and I'd be happy for any continuation. Vin:) |
Felicity Dream chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 (cackles) This is my pairing! Ain't nobody taking me from it, and fan-freaking-tastic fics like this just feeds my obsession XD |
ravenhusker chapter 1 . 11/23/2017 Aww yeah. These two are hot! All that pent-up, untapped human interaction and suppressed feelings for Michael; and all that hidden, mysterious energy emanating from Captain Lorca. Yes, please do write more for this interesting and dynamic duo. ;) |
Sweetiedee chapter 1 . 11/15/2017 Amazing! Love it! |
VioletVision chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 Wonderful! Fabulous! Just what I was looking for! |
sofiabella chapter 1 . 10/28/2017 “Passion had a taste and a name and it's name was Gabriel-fucking-Lorca.” Dear god yes, yes it does and yes he is. I love this ship so much and you write it beautifully! Just a heads up about a word choice in the sentence “his pearly white skin seemed to admix with her alabaster flesh.” Alabaster is usually associated with the color white. |
Paradaisu chapter 1 . 10/24/2017 Oh my... Captain Lorca! Steamy one-shot! Good work here ;) |
aprilf00l chapter 1 . 10/24/2017 Great 2nd chapter! |
okdreaming chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 I really like this. My two favourite characters, so much chemistry and it looks like the show is going to waste it. |
MangaStarAngel chapter 1 . 10/20/2017 I really liked the steamyness of this one-shot. yay Lorca/Burnham smut |