Reviews for An Empire of Ice & Fire
lalalamb chapter 16 . 7/6
so he bonded with Rhaegal when he touch the egg? I suppose rhaegal had not forgotten him.
L0NER18 chapter 108 . 6/30
It was good. Well worth the read. To many sex scenes for my tastes but to each their own I suppose.
L0NER18 chapter 52 . 6/28
The hound is one of my favorite GOT characters. Just and I mean JUST behind Ser Bronn of the black water. Really hoping to see Bronn and Jaime change sides. The Jaime arc in the show upset me so much. All that development just to go back to that crazy Bh.
L0NER18 chapter 40 . 6/28
It took just a second to remember where that scene came from. But honestly it works. Twin makes a good longshanks.
L0NER18 chapter 1 . 6/26
The perspective changes could use a line break to let the reader know that a new character is speaking.
winterempress chapter 21 . 6/23
oh thank god rhaegal lived i almost cried
winterempress chapter 11 . 6/23
ned
Mister LaGuardia chapter 28 . 6/17
I'm rereading this (never finished it and need a refresher) and while the plot in general is still awesome I'm now noticing a short-lived of inconsistencies. People knowing stuff they weren't informed of us probably my biggest issue. I love this story, but I wish you'd go over it and polish some things up.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 94 . 6/16
Ooh interesting, it looks like Daenerys is fighting against the transformation.
Heartwarming scene with his mother and father and three of four ancestors. One thing that could have made it better would have been if his siblings Aegon and Rhaenys and their mother Elia there.
Wow, it would have been a senseless sacrifice. Good thing it did not happen.
The Lord of Light's promised messiah has come.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 93 . 6/16
Heartbreaking scene of Arya, Rhaegar, and Saera screaming. I wonder if this makes Crown Prince Rhaegar emperor now. I can just imagine screaming in sadness if informed, I don't want to be emperor, I want kepa and muña.
A mournful song and a fitting funeral especially on short notice.
There darkest hour but as the saying goes, "It is always darkest before the dawn." Technically inaccurate but inspirational.
Arya and Rhaegar are really close, I can tell they really love each other.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 91 . 6/16
Arya was right, Gendry does sound like a true lord. He was able to rally his men before the battle when he even very brave men were scared out of their minds from Army of the Dead charging at them.
That battle was epic, it reminded of some of the battles from Lord of the Rings. So much so I would not be surprised if the Night King even says there will be no dawn for men, and it was only a delaying action. I can hear the anguish in Dany's voice, "They are dying down there, Jon! My men… our men…" I found hard to believe the same woman who is fiercely protective of her followers can be so callous as to mass murder innocent men, women, and children.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 90 . 6/16
When I first heard the motto, the lone wolf dies but the pack survives, I believed it to mean essentially lean on your family and friends because we are stronger together but after what Dany said, I think it could also mean what Spock said, the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few. I saying I have always hated.
I am a little surprised Jon did say that Dany sounded like Serena.
Good work.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 89 . 6/16
Good chapter.
I love the dragon riding scene as well, it upset me greatly how he rejects his Targaryen heritage. I love stories when he embraces it, he does not have to deny he is a Stark to accept he is Targaryen.
I liked Missandei as well, one of the few people in her inner circle who were unquestionably loyal to her. She was one of the smartest on the show as well. Knowing 19 languages. Her death sent Dany over the edge especially because of how pointless and cruel it was.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 88 . 6/16
I will have to check out The Long Night that was Promised, that is high praise coming from you as this not only the best GoT story I have ever read but one of the best fics I have read of any medium.
Oh thank God Catelyn survived in this story, and I do not say that lightly. She really grew on me in this fic, same with Sansa.
I think you mean the Night King has a dragon twice as big.
In a way, he still has the Stark brooding trait.
Jaehaerys III Targaryen chapter 86 . 6/16
The imagined life Jon had sounds like it could be in your other story, My Father's Son.
Sansa was right. If they executed Petyr from the start, I imagine some people would look at Daenerys and think "Uh oh, here we going again. The Mad King reborn."
As I read the Battle of Castle Black, it was so well written, I could feel my heart pounding as it continued.
I am curious what happened to the High Sparrow, he seeming have disappeared from the text.
Keep it up.
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