is this shiva

good chapter

Please keep writing this is a really good story. Also unlike people who write flames when they have no reason to I think you should be very happy with the quality of your writing. I also think that even though Zach is a complete brat, idiot and b**** he is a great character to have in your story.

update

nice chapter

Perfect and update soon please

excellent chapter

isnt chaos already in this story?

pepehands evil chaos fic *semi jokingly boos* evil chaos sucks lols
but seriously it is literally the stronget being possible so it literally impossible without asspull to somehow make percy stronger or unless your bring something like order used in other fanfics as chaos opposite to bless percy it's to far of a challenge to overcome universe is doomed pepehands

excellent chapter

So he decide to send abused kids to the place where he was treated so bad he tries to commit suicide

So why did they believe that percy was the culprit?
So disappointed he tried to kill hiseof just cause he got cheated on and people are the camp hated him. Why didn't he just go to new Rome or into the ocean

nice job

It takes talent to make someone cringe enough to stop reading after the summary and first sentence

How many more of these improbable and cliche fics are going to be published with nearly the same plot