| Reviews for Sweet Disaster |
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   FallenMarbles chapter 1 . 9/15 I want more of this story i enjoyed it very much |
| M-265 mixed luck chapter 1 . 8/20 I loved this! please, I bag of you, make more. the thing I loved most was how you had the elites messing up our human metaphors and phrases. also, your OC... god how do I put this in words... it sounds badass. a eastern Londoner, who I assume is a spartan, with a practical army-giddier-ridder offer for prosthetic, strong enough to pick up a full grown elite without his armor, and to top it all off, it sounds like from his personality and nickname, that he could take on master chief and Doom guy at the same time with no help. though, one problem, in the 9th sentence from the end, wouldn't he turn his hand into fleshy ribbons if he punched it with his metal hand? or has he perfected it so that he doesn't? |
| bmanbeast57 chapter 1 . 6/18 Make it a story please |
| Erringbirdking chapter 1 . 7/27/2019 Please continue this |
| Ryan chapter 1 . 7/18/2019 I love this story so far, I hope it continues! |
| Xenmorpher3mlp chapter 1 . 7/16/2019 Love it, need to read mooooorre! |
| Xenmorpher3mlp chapter 1 . 7/16/2019 Keep going |
| Apple424 chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 It was really good it would be a nice story |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 Is so good |
| Daytom Kabreksov chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 Honestly all I want to see is this made into a full series, but I hav noh money for commission... |
| LONE RANGER 97 chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 I love this story I want to read the next chapter when is it coming out!? |
| Dragzaval chapter 1 . 8/21/2018 do more please i want to see where this story goes |
| ezbw chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 Honestly, I was lookig for a mild relationship, wihout sex or rough play, and when I saw this story, I was like, "this dude puts humor and love together" and I started reading more. Dude... when I reached the end of this story I was like, "WHAT!? THERE'S NO SECOND CHAPTER?! NooOOoOOOOOOOOoOooOoOooOoOOOoO!" Anyway, I just want to say that you have a very creative mind! Nice! :D |
| SaltySieger159 chapter 1 . 4/4/2018 I hope you continue this story. There's not that many good sangheili romance stories out there. |
| Extraordinary Gentleman chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 Nice story, I really enjoyed it. Although your grammar sucks ass, I think this has potential, you should continue writing. |
