Reviews for The Last Dragon |
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Silver chapter 10 . 7/11 Yeah, I'm out. Sry. This is good but it needs a Beta, not for grammar and spelling but for the plot holes and logic |
Silver chapter 8 . 7/11 This is a great story but Alyxs age makes absolutely no sense. I get child prodigies and hav read several books and fics with them but in this it just doesn't add up. I just corrected it in my head by making him older but still something you may want to look at. |
MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 33 . 7/10 Please continue this story and update soon! |
Kelorus chapter 33 . 6/13 Seriously? This cliffhanger... |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28 Okay the story has been great so far lol this can be really good especially with Robert not wanting to kill him all the time and Varys helping him |
Kira007Goddess of Chaos chapter 7 . 4/27 Stop changing his name. Decide one. |
zarian878 chapter 33 . 4/24 update please |
CheshireNL chapter 33 . 4/18 Please update is awesome |
zeroimpulse000 chapter 33 . 4/13 Awesome |
Guest chapter 33 . 3/27 Kill the fucker |
Anime Lovers Indonesia chapter 33 . 2/19 when you up |
Diablo-the-Fallen chapter 33 . 12/29/2019 I really like this story and really wanna see it continued, do you have any plans to continue it any time soon? |
MaegorTheSeidhr chapter 2 . 12/28/2019 Moar lovin’ cersei |
MaegorTheSeidhr chapter 1 . 12/28/2019 Beautiful and make Cersei a loving mother |
Guest chapter 33 . 12/22/2019 Update please |