This is awesome so far, really has potential. A little bothered by the fact that two cannon things are different such as the iconic motion sickness and also the fact that he should have been able to eat grimm after it separated from the host body because grimm dissolve.

this is awsome please continue it

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great story

This really awesome

Im very interested. Cant wait to see more

Awesome start, can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you decide to continue this story.

You person has invoked my interest, Keep satisfying my interest to keep the bomb from going off...

Nah! I'm just kiddin', But good story!

Natsu needs to insanely protective of the girls. any idea of what ships your doing

The premise of this story looks rather good i can't wait to see where it goes and how you explain Natsu's origin and i enjoyed how you introduced him to Yang so soon early on.

Nice story

Great story so far, I am interested in seeing where you go with this, keep up the great work

I liked the chapter!

This is so exciting. It been a while since I've been this genuinely excited. Humanoid Grimm I'd assume. I'll check out the story and vote can't wait for the new chapter.

Nice start!