Really good. I wasn't sure about this, not really a fan of reader inserts. But I love how you know Dragon Ball and RWBY enough to mesh the worlds together.

I'm glad RWBY gets in on the action to Namek, and would really like to see where this goes.

I kinda wish Kail or I would leave Beacon though, I think it'd be better and more fun.

This is really bad trying to mesh entire worlds always makes for an awful read

RWBY is about to experience some real terror.

What a stupid, arrogant, selfish decision from RWBY. Good fight scenes though.

If it ok I will pretend that the saiyan is my OC Red Tiger

Can’t sense their ki? Hmmmm sounds a lot like the androids, since you know Atlas in RWBY are known for their machines, and yes adorable Penny

When rantingbanshee learns to spell I think people are more likely to pay attention to what they have to say.

Ignore ZadArchie, he/she is a known griefer who tries to get anyone posting stories in trouble for the flimsiest of reasons that don't stand scrutiny.

ZadArchie is part of the notorious 'Critics United' who's mission is to abuse what poultry and little power they have to destroy other people's literature works simply because they enjoy the power trip.

Needless to say, the police are investigating them for cyber-bullying so it's best to just ignore them.

This story is written in second-person language, implying the reader a character in the story. By making the reader a character in the story, it makes the story interactive. Interactive content is not permitted on this site per the Rules & Guidelines we all agreed to when we signed up for accounts. To avoid this issue, simply rewrite the story in first or third person with a generic OC name. Take these suggestions into consideration as they will help you avoid issues with the rules in the future. Please understand, I say what I say in the spirit of what this site is about: making good stories great, if not brilliant.

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Critics United

Can you have Kakarot take a really big hit to the head please, it just breaks my heart to see him being evil,
Just give kakarot a chance to become goku and Vegeta become good

The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

You should remove all of the elements related to the reader and replace them with a canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own.

can you or someone you know make a story when goku black and zamasu are reborn in remnant with black as ruby's brother son of summer and zamasu as weiss' brother

the pairing need to be black x weiss and zamasu x ruby

Loved it, and I think it was a good call to cut it into parts. Build up the suspense for the wait.

Five, huh? Are Broly and Paragus there too?

Great Job! Can’t wait for the next part