Wow. What a first meeting!

Awesome first chapter! It was really hot and the wording you have is very good! You wrote the personalities of Serenity and Endymion just how I imagined them! Serenity being so new to passion and Endymion being well, Endymion lol great characterization! Again though, really hot and sexy! I really hope you continue because this is a great plot so far!

I don't know if you are aware there is no story to read here.

Could you reupload the story, please? There is a formation problem...

please fix the formatting, it's hard to read.

i couldn't read the story well. The format is off. Please fix.

I was so excited to see that you had uploaded again! But as others have already said, there seems to be a formatting issue. I think I picked out all the text, but I’d love to read it again once you reupload it, and then I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Can't read...fix formatting...even though I am not a fan of Serenity and wishes she were either less powerful (or dead), I still wanted to read this..

AHHh good story if you didn’t have all this coding and stf through it... very hard to read.

please fix the format you can't read this at all

Did you upload this from your phone? I only guess because part of the code that was uploaded says "Android Emoji."

I want to read... but I'm not willing to strain my eyes searching through formatting jargon to find the text. Please fix!

I love your stuff and I was so excited when I saw an update from you, but I think there was an issue when you uploaded this. :( I hope you keep up with whatever this story is because you're plot seems absolutely lovely!

It's ineligible like I literally can't read one word of it. What did you use to upload your story?

Appreciate the chance to read a new story from you but any chance you can fix the formatting? It’s making it illegible. Thanks!

okay lots and lots and lots of glitches but i like the rest of your stuff so fix things please?