Entonces has usado el final que te sugerí, ¡Muchísimas gracias!

I loved this story it made me cry.

Awesome happy ending to a really brilliant story. :) Also really enjoyed the altered look you gave the older Nyx in the story. :)

Beautiful just beautifull

And they all lived happily ever after... until the next adventure!

A beautiful, action-packed, and heartfelt story that I hope will get a sequel. Well done!

Excellent chapter

Another brilliant chapter it's good to see Enid and Elodie work things out thanks to the timeline changes.

Also good to see that the future blueprints we're destroyed so now Boxman can't use them again, till he creates them in the present/future.

I wonder what kinda of future/changes awaits our young heroes when they get back home.

Really awesome chapter I loved the shout out to Star Wars. :)

Boxman has once again been sent packing defeated, but does this mean the adventure is really over? Or do our future and present heroes still have some things to take care of, not to mention are there any other possible threats they will have to face before returning back to their proper timelines?

I know one thing that needs to be done and that is taking away Boxman's access to time travel. Otherwise there's the chance of him doing something like trying to kill the OK K.O character when their babies, or even worse do something so crazy/stupid that he could risk destroying time and space itself! A bit of a worse case scenario but there's a reason time travel shouldn't be in the hands of crazy evil people like Boxman.

Excellent chapter. :)

Nice start, man:}

Awesome chapter can't wait to see the next chapter

Awesome chapter. :)

Ooo can't wait for the next chapter keep it up your doing great

Awesome chapter as see a enemy fall in Raymond, to a awesome combo attack from Rad and Shannon.

It also seems the cat is out of the bag for what Richie really looks like, and I think it won't take much for Shannon and Rad to connect the dots.

Interesting story can't wait to see what happens next