Please Update

Quite a fun chapter. Was expecting scpetile, but staraptor is cool too

Alright man, looks like I'm all caught up now :). So far, this is a pretty damn good fic you're writing! I'm really enjoying the OC's you've created and the chemistry they share. The Brute, the Jokester, the Tsundere, and the main character. A nice rag tag group you've created there :). However, there are issues that I've noticed with this story. And I mean no disrespect, just some things that you might want to fix or shift in future chapters.

First, even though this is a PokémonXRBWY fic, there really isn't much pokémon action going on at all. And while I understand that you mentioned that Greninja wouldn't be shown much since Ash is trying to hide his identity, you should have at least some chapters that contain Ash and his Pokémon chilling, killing Grimm, or something productive to get used to their new home.

Second, have Ash do something. Honestly, he just seems to be an inserted character in this new world that hasn't done anything to change the course of story. We haven't even seen him fight at all with his weapon! He's just. There.

Third, the pacing. I can't be the only one that feels like this is going too fast. What happened to the Forever Falls portion? That would have been a PERFECT moment to have some great Team SHAD bonding and badass fighting scenes. The first team battle in the Emerald Falls was a nice introduction to their team building and tactics. And what happened to the other classes? Combat Class portions, Oobleck's coffee rush, Cardin's bullying? I feel like you should slow down, maybe write an overview of what you want done with your story so that you don't have to jump in and create a fresh chapter without any prior readiness.

Again, I don't want to seem like I'm trashing this story, because this story has great potential and I don't want to see this fail or abandoned. I just felt like I needed to express my overall thoughts from reading this from beginning to end. Which is why I didn't drop any long reviews like I usually do with other stories, every chapter. So yeah man, just my 2 centavos. As for the grammar and structuring, I can tell you've improved with every chapter posted. The first chapter was filled with many spelling and grammar errors, and the latest chapters have only a few here and there. So, great job there!

Also, I don't know if you've come up with any semblance ideas, but I think I have a good one that might interest you. Picture this, have his semblance be the ability to use his Pokémon's abilities. The way he would use his semblance is by touching one of his pokeballs and when he activates his aura, he gains the moves, speed, natural abilities, and strength of the chosen pokémon. For example, say he activates his semblance by touching Pikachu's ball. He would gain the swiftness, strength, and have the ability to use Thunderbolt, Quick Attack, ect. But here's the catch. Depending on the pokémon he chooses, his strain on his body will vary. If he uses Pikachu, he might be able to handle it for some time before he needs to recharge his aura. But if he uses something like Charizard, he becomes incredibly powerful and has flight, like the pokémon itself, but he can only use it for a short time since he's not used to the massive strain of all the potent power. You can also apply Pikachu to this as well, since he is a legendary "killer", but I just feel like Pikachu should be his main go to pokémon semblance since they're bros. I just feel like this would go perfect with Ash, and would be a great way to incorporate his Pokémon into one-on-one hand to hand combat without bringing them out. Hell, you can even do something like Soul Eater, where Ash will be able to telepathically talk with his Pokémon that he's borrowing his ability from. Just a suggestion that's been cooking in my brain while reading this :).

But yeah man, once again, nice story you have going on here! You have no obligation to follow my advice, since this is your story. But I just wanted to present some of my observations and thoughts that might help you during your writing process... I guess I've said all I've been wanting to say haha. Thanks for creating this cool fic, I appreciate it for bringing us some enjoyment during these fucked times. All I have left to say is, stay safe, wash your hands, and stay the fuck at home! Take care, my good author. Smell ya later :D!

CHARIZARD TOO?! H

Holy hell. Heather already sounds extremely OP wtf. I hope she has someone major weakness or something, because if not then she's gonna be an annoying character spamming ZA WARUDO everywhere... Besides that, hell yeah! Pikachu is incoming :D! And I wonder what's up with Ash's connection with everyone else? Time-travel? Father Ketchum? Reincarnation? This just keeps getting better and better!

YO, ASH'S LAUNCH SCENE GOT ME SCREAMIN! Definitely one of the best of all the versions I've read XD!

Man, I really hope you Pikachu finds his way in somehow. It just doesn't feel right for Ash to not have his little buddy (;~;)...

P.S. AuraSpartanshipping sounds so badass

Huh. Honestly, Ash revealing his secret to Weiss actually wasn't cringe! Usually, when the main character reveals their world jumping secret as soon as the first or second chapter, the reactions are usually along the lines of "okay". Which I fkn hate and cringe so hard that it automatically gets dropped. Thankfully, you managed to get a somewhat realistic response out of Weiss, and provided some proof to her as well, which was smooth and flowed well with the chapter. So, nice job there :)! Though, I hope they keep the secret together for quite some time and don't blab it out to the next person they see. As for the first 2 chapters, they're pretty good man. The grammar can use some help, but the story is intriguing and the story is flowing quite nicely. I hope it continues to go up from here :D!

Awesome chapter and love the part where Heather start to suspect about Ash and where Ash's Sceptile appear battle against Beowulf.

Awesome chapter and love the part where Ash tell Weiss to forgive Blake and when he was remind about his friends and the appearance of Ash's Charizard.

Awesome chapter and love the scene where the teams meets Penny and when they having trouble with the noise from team RWBY.

Awesome chapter and love the scene where the teams meet Penny and when they having trouble sleeping with the noise from team RWBY.

Awesome chapter and love the scene where team know each other knowing about their semblance and wondering who the mystery guy is.

Awesome chapter and love the scene where all 3 team battle 3 powerful grims and the creation Team SHAD(SHADE).

Excellent chapter! I enjoyed it! For an original chapter though, ya did good! Keep em coming!

Seems like things are gonna get quite interesting with Team CINDER here... Also, Ash should keep his guard up. Emerald is a natural pick-pocket. If she were able to take one of Ash’s Pokéballs without him noticing? That’s a whole ‘nother can of worms waiting to be opened!

In any case, see ya next update! Take your time though. You got a life of your own after all!