| Reviews for Stark's Daughter |
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  M chapter 10 . 12/29/2018 Love this. |
| M chapter 9 . 12/29/2018 Yeah! |
 Awritingbookworm chapter 10 . 12/26/2018 That’s it! Please write more! |
| M chapter 8 . 7/30/2018 Wow! |
| M chapter 7 . 7/30/2018 Awww! |
| M chapter 6 . 7/30/2018 Lee is such a good character. |
| M chapter 5 . 7/30/2018 Awesome chapter! |
| M chapter 4 . 7/30/2018 Love this. |
| M chapter 3 . 7/30/2018 Love this. Tony's comment is hilarious. |
| M chapter 2 . 7/30/2018 Love Ophelia. Awesome starting point. |
| seraphimdawnbaker chapter 6 . 12/3/2017 Um. I hope you don’t mind some constructive criticism. I loved the plot of the story however, it feels dry. There could have been more suspense by keeping the dna a secret. I also think it would be a little better if there were more descriptors. Such as, the area surrounding the characters or the small movements of a face. It could also be better if you showed us the characters emotion instead of just telling. I would have felt more connected to your character if you had fleshed her out a bit more. I love your story! I hope you don’t take my criticism the wrong way. |
| heartshiper chapter 6 . 11/5/2017 this us amazing please do sequel it |
