Reviews for The Unclocker
witchinmoonlight chapter 51 . 12/3/2019
Alright, another one bites the dust. Who's next? Or more importantly, who's left? I wonder if Ladybug and Cat Noir will figure out that Hawkmoth is Gabriel Agreste. Or is this an AU where Hawkmoth is not Gabriel? Interesting either way. Keep up the good work and hope to see you soon!
Dad chapter 51 . 12/3/2019
Nice flow. Good length for a post.
"..since him and .. " s.b. since he and
"..attempted to rationalize..." s.b. attempted to reason with
"...has the advantage in number..." s.b. numbers
"...on top of the fences" s.b. fence
"his hand down the gate" s.b. his hand down on the gate
"struggles against the yo-yo" s.b. struggled
Hkt29 chapter 51 . 12/3/2019
Now that they know about their secret identities they can coordinate better, Simon Says was clearly easier to defeat this time.
witchinmoonlight chapter 50 . 10/5/2019
Alright, finally caught up with this fanfic! I have to say, this has been quite the treat! Seeing their struggles as they take on the akumatized villains once again, some even harder than others. I wasn't expecting an identity reveal however. Question- who exactly is Blasto though? I don't remember him being in Season 1 (or any season for that matter). And more importantly, how does he relate to the Unclocker? Anyway, great work and hope to see you soon!
KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 50 . 9/25/2019
YES I'M STILL ALIVE, FEELING MIRACULOUS GETTING BACK TO THIS! WARNING, REVIEWS FROM CHAPTER 26 TO 50! (Huge Smug Smirk)

HORRIFICATOR, Adrien stuck in the classroom right only good thing was Rose sweetly offering him a juice. Which still Chole swiped out his hand like nothing. Alya stating "Did you hear that? Ladybug put me in charge." Wow Césaire that's great honor... oh wait no it's not. True Kitty wasn't so desperate to transform in front of his brother Nino and his other classmates. Right Juleka was an example: don't so fear to Horrificator. Nino good listening to Adrien in that JUST DON'T PANIC! Alya and Cholè arguing over her filming yes Chole was right, that could have gotten them killed stupid move Alya. I know Adrien was like "Girls, girls your both purretty but SHUT UP!" Horrificator smacking her tail into Ladybrat continuously to hilarious. Good Clumsinette knows she is NOTHING without Cattastic Kitty Cat Noir!

COPYCAT, Okay yes Adrien not your best mew-oment Kitty. Yet Theo had it coming I mean, he was an unknown pedophile! Besides Kitty ONE akuma you caused compared to Ladybrat's multiple and the number continues to rise (Yes I mean from Season 2 & 3...) Right Clumsinette STOLE Adrien's phone stalker-ish nut! Damn police KITTY WAS FRAMED YOU IDIOTS! To tell the difference between the Cats seriously Bug pulling his arm? Next time something less painful. CopyCat shut up, Cat Noir does apurreciate what he has with Ladybrat me-owre than anyone especially you know. (Glares at Theo... GRABS A CHAINSAW)!

PIXELMATOR, Good Adrien and Plagg avoided getting trapped with Cholè. Penny Rolling getting hit by him is always annoying. Heck she did the right thing kicking him out the hotel, he is complete nut. Dealing with him this second time quicker and better thankfully.

ROGERCOP, That pepper didn't work this time damn. Rogercop seems stronger because your feeling weaker Ladybrat. Wait... WHAT HE THROW HER BY HER PIGTAILS?! (Smug Smirk) Nice move Sir Rogercop. Sorry Plagg getting you wet with water a last resort. Oh yes Kitty is Bug's True Lucky Charm alright and always. HANDCUFFED so what Kitty won't give up, hiss sense of humor is miraculously powerful. Kitty being one the only to break the akuma object is always better.

MIME, Hey cats are not troublesome Ladybrat your just to blind to see their purrfection! Kitty's fencing skills against Mime's invisible sword sweet. A jet pack, well it's cool same with the small Unclocker moment. That's an akuma for you, believing things would be better if HawkMoth wins. Purrlease he has made poor Kitty's life in Cat Claws and Agreste Jr a living hell. Mylène's father Fred didn't deserve this from his understudy Chris nor the play director Sarah (honestly I believe IS SABRINA'S MOTHER) HawkMoth remembered Cat Noir's feather allergy NOOOO!

ANIMAN, CAT NOIR IS MORE PAIN THAN HE SHOULD EVER BE WITCH IS HORRIBLE! He shouldn't be feeling pain like this. Kim you DID deserve Animan after you. The bus driver listening to Kitty is refreshing, normally they only listen to Ladybrat. Her get cuts and glassed up being thrown through a window GREAT! Right on he loves cats, Animan is a smart man.

DARKBLADE, Sorry Kitty but hopefully you get your Jagged Stone autograph. Non-dominant hand yet still he's giving Darkblade a fight. Irony indeed, D'Argencourt you do compliment your students. ;) Really it took Kitty 3 tries to break the damn sword? Huh when they first fought it only took Bug ONE TRY!

ANTIBUG, Things don't always go according to plan. Unclocker switching things so they fight Antibug BEFORE Vanisher crazy. True Adrien knows Chole best. So of course Kitty tries to reason with her akumaitized. It was close to working too. Hey Copy-bug... CATTASTIC KITTY CAT NOIR IS NO ONE'S SIDEKICK! Plus people care about Sabrina very much, heck I do a lot as a character. No Kitty don't give up on fencing it's a great part of your craft. Cutting Antibug's hair yea that definitely was smooth move. ;)

KUNG FOOD, Punderful point Kitty yes fighting his minions much like a video game. Jagged Stone's sword as a minion crazy cut cool. (Giggles) Tikki shut up, they are partners it's not the end of the world if Kitty knows the truth THAT'S BEEN DENIED TO HIM FOR SO LONG! Marlena Césaire minion weaponry sweet candy. ;) As for Alec yes Plagg would have loved it, I seem him complimenting Alec for the cheese. Now Kitty you would taste Cattastic I bet, as golden as your heart and as bright as your spirit. LADYBRAT LANDED IN THE SOUP, WAS BURNED BADLY SWEET!

VANISHER, Them deciding on a game plan sweet. Okay 6 akumas left not so bad compared to it all started. No Cat Noir no, you didn't make mistakes when dealing with Princess Fragrance the first time around. Plus hey Clumsinette lost Tikki even worse too. Vanisher was a fun akuma. She caused Chole distress and nearly had Ladybrat's stupid earrings.

PRINCESS FRAGRANCE, Losing Tikki and extra time lost too damn Clumsinette. (Giggles) I swear based on social standing and responsibility thrown on them Adrien and Prince Ali could be close as brothers. Kitty giving Prince Ali a piggyback ride, I'm so jealous of Ali. Of course Ladybrat you could always count on Cat Noir no matter the situation.

SIMON SAYS, Bug knows Kitty is Adrien huh too her long enough. She has no purrblem that Cattastic Kitty Cat Noir is purrfect Adrien Agreste thank pink. She better keep herself grounded but anyway Adrien would do it tor her. Nino of course freaked out, his brother maybe in trouble and he doesn't know where Adrien is. Tikki seriously shut up. Plagg is right it's about time. (Me-owre than the Cats realize) Truly both Cats have suffered thiss stupid Love Square far too long. Plagg's Kitten needs a loving win here.
Bella2be chapter 50 . 9/22/2019
It definitely will be! Your work is amazing!
Hkt29 chapter 50 . 9/20/2019
Good work.

Now they detransformed in front of each other they can't pretend that they don't know.
Hkt29 chapter 49 . 9/13/2019
Reveal coming.
kenzieq15 chapter 48 . 8/19/2019
This is a great story and has amazing story plot. However my personal opinion is that it's too long. I think after maybe a couple more chapters you need to end it because we already know that they stop the villains. So what now? How will they stop this one?
Hkt29 chapter 48 . 8/14/2019
This chapter showed why they should know each other's identities.
Hkt29 chapter 47 . 8/2/2019
Now Ladybug and Chat should be nicer with Chloe so she won't be akumatized.
Bella2be chapter 47 . 8/1/2019
I had fun reading it!
Hkt29 chapter 46 . 7/19/2019
Nice that they got some rest. Will Chat reveal his identity to her?
James Martin chapter 46 . 7/18/2019
well done
me chapter 45 . 7/10/2019
Some issues: If you get hit in the ribs with a huge sword, you normally fly off in two smaller pieces. You don't normally get back up. Boiling soup seems like it would cause more than just skin redness. She needs to keep from totally submerging if the suit is going to keep her safe. Where did "Chaton" come from? A nasty punch to the stomach normally gets more of a pained noise and not a quip, although i guess that could come after. There were a couple of other typo type issues also.
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