This was a good chapter but you misplaced some words like push up instead of pull up daises and have that fly instead of let that Fly but still good it was nice that Ash helped the Cerulean sisters with their show since Misty was sick and it was nice that Daisy changed her mind on Ash being Boyfriend material and nice that Lily said looks like a prince from a old movie which she was referring to Eric from the little mermaid which Ash could pull of his look and it was funny that Daisy said Misty was still not pretty enough for a man and here are some ideas for future Water type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) since you done her sisters 2, Slastoiseshipping (Neenah) from the first movie 3, Muchwatershipping (Marina) from the Orange islands 4, Discoveredshipping (Wilhomena) who has a Maril 5, Releasedshipping (Solidad) 6, Footpathshipping (Sierra) 7, Pearlshipping (Dawn) 8, Cissy the Orange islands Gym leader 9, Trinity 10, Olesia 11, Tammy 12, Pietra who has also has a Maril 13, Madeleine 14, Alice (Johto) 15, Sumomo the kimono sister with a Vaporeon 16, Lauren who also has a Piplup.

This was a good chapter it was interesting that Ash had a girl sleeping with him at the beginning when it usually happened at the end and I get why Skyla wanted a female Unfezent lots of trainer would want a pair of Pokemon so it not unusual and it was nice that both their Unfezents have taken a liking to each other so it mirors thief trainers feelings and it was nice that Ash had Oshiwatt do a Combo move since he never used them in the Black and White Anime even when Dawn returned and the puns were funny and here are some ideas for future Flying type chapters 1, Hollyhockshipping (Holly) 2, Welcomecustomshipping ( Carol) 3, Backwardhatshipping ( Maren) since they both have a connection to Lugia 4, Don’tbendacendshipping (Maya) 5, Kahili the pokegolf Champion and Elite Four member of Alola 6, Krystal who has a Connection to Zapdous 7, Miki who has a Skarmary 8, Mariah (Johto) 9, Janet 10, Dr Anna who has a Zubat.

This was a good story but Shauna didn’t arrive until later at the Kalos League and this Ships name is Cameoheroshipping but still good it was nice to see Ash getting to know Astrid more since their Rematch during this the League was not completely shown and it was nice that She and Alain got to see each other again even though their interaction during this storie was not all friendly and it was nice that Astrid asked Ash our for Dinner after the opening Ceremony and nice that Ash saved Her Absol from Team rocket and she got to learn about and See the Bond phenomenon in person and here are some ideas for future Dark type chapters 1, Sessionshipping (Angela) 2, Talonflameshipping ( Malva) 3, Cheekmarkshipping (Mightyena Preformer) 4, Katrina (Hoenn) 5, Rhoda who has a Sneasel 6, Tamao the Kimono sister with an Umbreon 7, Concetta who has a Scraggy.

This was a good story but Miette is not revealed to be a Preformer until after Ash’s Gym battle against Clemont and I don’t think Miette does have a Crush on Ash she just says it to either Teaser Serena or to motivate her to help her feeling to him and I prefer Poffleshipping as the name but still good and it was nice of her to teach Ash how to make Pokepuffs and it was funny how Clemont didn’t have his bag with him for his Invention reveal and here are some ideas for future Fairy type chapters 1, Amourshipping (Serena) 2, Ourstatueshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 3, Circusshipping ( Stella) 4, Humbleshipping ( Concordia) 5, Discoveredshipping ( Wilhomena) 6, Mina the last trail captain 7, Cerah The Pokejump Sludge champion 8, Melodi 9, Princess Kimia who has a Shiny Gardevoir 10, Samantha who has a Mawile 11, Petria who has a Maril 12, Rhonda 13, Peitra 14, Britney who has a Three Igglybuffs.

This was a good story but the fersility that Ash is heading to next is the BattleArena not the Battle Tycoon the Frontier Brain is knowned as Arena Tycoon and Max would know the way since his Pokenav has Data on the Locations of the Fersiltys but still good it was nice that Sabrina is more friendy now though I think Brock won’t be so eager to flirt with her after what she did to him and Misty and it was good that Sabrina make Dolls of all her Challangers instead of turning them into Dolly’s not so creepy and it was nice she showed Ash the view of the moon in Spirit form and it was cute she keeps Ash’s doll with her’s on her bed since she holds him in a special way since he saved her from herself and heres are some ideas for future Psychic type chapters 1, Advancetwinsshipping (Liza) the twin Gymleader 2, Chimetuneshipping ( Francesca) 3, Electricteleportionshping (Mira) 4, Don’tBendascendshipping (Maya) 5, Jourdeplusieshipping ( Elise) 6, Pavilionshipping (Diana) because she has a Connection to Celebi 7, Wisheshipping ( Gemma) Since she has connection to Jirachi 8, Circusshipping (Stella) 9, Humbleshipping (Concordia) 10, Tenderheartshipping (Anthea) 11, Hairshipping (Kelly) 12, Rhonda 13, Princess Kimia 14, Meoldi who both have a Gardevoir.

This was a good story I guess Ash now knows how Brock feels when he got rejected by every girl he flirted with this was not something he usually did looking for a girl to kiss with but I was willing to do it for Tradition it was Nice that Elesa helped him out and nice you had her in her BW2 Outfit it was not nice of Iris to make fun of his misfortune but nice that Cilan shut her up in the end and the Addison of Georgia and Bianca it was nice that when she realised that Pikachu was serious about the Mistletoe and that she feeler bad about rejecting Ash and wanted to kiss him after all and here are some ideas for future Electric type chapters 1, Pearlshipping (Dawn) 2, Ourstatueshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 3, Backviewshipping (Solona) who has a Plusio 4, Fulashipping (Margo) since she has Connection Zeraora 5, Cinamativeshipping (Jean) from the Pikachu making episode 6, Alyssa 7, Mary 8, Theresa 9, Ellie 10 Satsuki the kimono Sister who has a Jolteon 11, Visquez the apprentice of L’t Surge 12, one of the girls of team Electric Princess Chargabug/Vikavolt racers.

This was a good story nice that Lusamene see Lillie with Ash and she does know that he is the one who is helping her touch Pokemon again and it was funny how Nebby teleported Ash to Lusamene’s office’s Closet then with Lillie back to the Observation Area then to the roof of the Aither Paradise then to the Pokemon School then to Kukuki’s then to the Boat and then sometime later teleports them to Ash’s room back in Pallet town and it was also funny that while Lusamene is very eager to be a Grandma but Delia isn’t and now Lana is Happy that her sister will stop asking if Ash is her boyfriend since he’s now with Lillie and nice that Lillie is now able to touch Nebby and nice that she trust Ash the most and here are some ideas for future Ice type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) 2, AdvanceShipping (May) 3, Takecareshipping ( Leona) since she has a Swinup 4, Slastoiseshipping ( Nessha) 5, Releasedshipping (Solidad) 6, Cehra the Pokejump sledge champion 7, Rhoda who has a Sneasel 8, Peggy who also has Swinup 9, Sara Lee the Preformer who has Glaceon 10, Nene who has Smoochums 11, Marilyn who had Shellder.

Please do also one with Katie, Salvia and Jasmine, if you hadn't done these.
I'm to lazy to search if they were done

Awwww...I really liked the chemistry between Ash x Astrid. I think Ash would be better off with her than any of the other girls Ash has been with. I don't like her with Alain (or Tobias 2.0) because the only time they ever had any contact was in Mega Evolution Special I and that was it. You should write more of these two together, or if not, make a fanfic about it! It'd be Absol-utely heartwarming if you did!

Just out of curiosity have you already done temacu? Or will she appear in volume 8?.

Cool

I say crossover with dinosaur king

Maybe you should list the names of each lady next to each pairing. It’s kind of hard to know who’s being romanced by the ship name alone.

Blueryu here. Thanks for a great fic. As for this chapter, all I have to say is the old saying "never argue with a woman."Thanks again.

Was so busy with college and Roleplaying on devientart i completly forgot about this site. I habe to say reallhy liked the stories tbhis year. If you'd like i can provide element suggestions to do for next year