HOT

Ha! I love Toby’s assessment of their “waste of a night without Ralph”. I can just imagine him saying that with a little wink at Happy, because I’m sure Quintis has shared and enjoyed nights like that, too.

If Paige is flattered that Walter thinks she’s beautiful without makeup – and I love that this is based on that lovely Waige moment – she should be doubly flattered that he’s willing to postpone “something important” to be with her.

Walter keeping statistics on their lovemaking is perfect! I’m only surprised that Paige is surprised by it. She of all people knows that Walter is a genius in every aspect of his life.

Again, I love how you have a way of wrapping a story inside a theme. You have the title near the beginning and again at the end. But you also have Paige’s smile reflecting Walter’s; and you have Paige mentally noticing Walter’s expression throughout. It brings home the idea that while Walter may not always be emotionally expressive in words the way that most people can be, Paige still knows the depth of his emotions based on the expressiveness of his face.

I’m smiling too like an idiot :D
That was awesome, Thank you for this hot one!

Awesome!

Love it! Thank you for taking the time to write it ;)

Hot DAMN!
just amazing... Kudos! :)

Hot and steamy. I like it. Thank youuuu

So glad you posted this wow so hot

This is a pretty good smutt story you did great it sas worth the time you spend writting it
Thank you

O M G! That was ...Nice! Thank you very much
I like the way you continued the was very " believable"

That was really hot and really sweet. Excellent job writing this.

It was definitely worth your time and effort! The end of the episode was always going to lead to this, at least in our heads. I love how Walter just can't help mentally recording and analysing everything, even this!

Ooo la la! Is it warm in here? Right off the bat I fell in love with Walter telling her he was in fact working on something important. Her love song! Even though we know the first draft is gonna be horribly derpy. Then I can totally see Walter's competitive streak coming into play here! And Paige reaping all the many benefits. Beautifully done!

Lol... Walter just has to be the best at everything, hahaha.
This was amusing and a great read. :) good job!

Just like...never stop writing smut, okay? I totally believe that it took you all day, because writing anything has been taking me FOREVER lately. But this was definitely worth it. They both looked so happy at the end of last night's ep and this picked right up perfectly. We all know that Walter wants to win at sex and holds himself to a very high standard - that's just inevitable for him - but I am pretty sure Paige doesn't mind haha.
-lookingforthestars