Reviews for The Long Road Home |
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Guest chapter 26 . 3/9 I really hope you come back to finish off this story. I want to know what happens next! |
ddav123 chapter 26 . 2/13 Really wish you would continue with this story. I am enjoying it very much, you are an excellent writer. Regards |
totalmillennial chapter 26 . 1/26 Omg, I have just found this story. So many emotions. I know it’s been a while but I really hope you come back and finish this story. I would love to keep following Callies recovery. |
Luce chapter 26 . 11/10/2018 Honestly this story is amazing. You captured everyone so well. Please update! |
Guest chapter 26 . 11/2/2018 I remember reading at least a few chapters of this a long time ago, but I'm not on very often and that was it until now. I admit I did skip to where Stef found her since I already had the picture of her captivity and assaults, but it is so good. Her emotions as well as the moms' are written very well. It's heartbreaking but a very good fic. I will keep an eye out for more. |
Brittana022 chapter 26 . 10/10/2018 So happy Callie is going home. I can't wait to see how Callie will be like when she gets home. Keep up the good work. |
burnatbarbaraa chapter 26 . 10/1/2018 So glad you've updated! Can't wait to see how Callie will do in home |
Lila chapter 25 . 9/26/2018 Another great chapter! Thank you for the update. I can't wait to read more |
Guest chapter 24 . 9/15/2018 Please don’t disappear for ages again :( I love this story |
burnatbarbaraa chapter 24 . 9/5/2018 Such a great story! I hope you'll update soon! |
Lila chapter 22 . 8/29/2018 This fic is so sooo good. It's absolutely gut-wrenching and kind of sickening to read but that just speaks to your skill as a writer and a story teller. You can evoke really strong reactions and powerful emotions in your readers. Thank you for updating this! I love the detail that you write in and the time and care you spend on so vividly showing us not only what's going on but also how the characters feel. And I absolutely love love love when I see that you've updated this fic and I get so excited to read the new chapter and then it's like surprise! bonus! you get not one but TWO new chapters! it's your lucky day! loll I know you said in one of your author's notes that the kids are all away for the summer in this fic and you'll eventually be working them in. I'm looking forward to seeing them come into this story and how they react to everything that's happened/happening. No worries if not (because this is your story and no matter what you do it'll be great) but maybe could you bring them in in at least mentions earlier? So like, I know you said Brandon was at Juilliard and Mariana Jesus were at camps and Jude's with Sharon, and it totally makes sense that they'd be away for the summer and especially that Stef and Lena wouldn't want them at home during all of this, but maybe Stef and Lena just mention them in conversation or something. Like Lena says she spoke to Brandon earlier and he says he's learning loads, or Sharon texted them something about Jude or even they're just mentioned in passing at some point or in thought or something. Sorry I'm not trying to tell you how to write your story! I totally understand that it's not feasible for you to incorporate the other kids into the story right now and I know whatever you do will be great, I just figured I'd suggest it. Anyways, thank you for updating this story and I can't wait to read more and see where you take this |
Davis Family Fan chapter 21 . 8/27/2018 Oh, I just realized you updated twice. It’s heartbreaking to see Stef’s reaction to everything. I am looking forward to seeing how you write Calie’s progression through this. I can’t say enough how amazing this story is. |
Davis Family Fan chapter 22 . 8/27/2018 Seems she’s going I to withdrawal, poor thing! |
Guest chapter 22 . 8/27/2018 You’re writing this so well! |
Guest chapter 19 . 8/26/2018 Another great chapter poor Callie hopefully now she can start to heal When will the moms find out about the tattoo |