Reviews for One Winter's Night
NinjaGirl9797 chapter 6 . 7/19/2018
I love it baby ace is adorable
Rboooks chapter 6 . 1/7/2018
This is so cute. And my heart was melting the whole time. All of Ace's firsts were so wonderful I couldn't stop smiling. And then The punkin patch part where Ace gave a hug to every little one I almost died. Tha k you so much for writing this adorableness!
Sazky chapter 6 . 1/6/2018
aaahh another chapter, and so soon! have I died and gone to heaven?
this was... probably the most adorable chapter yet! I want "Ni-ni, dadas!" on my tombstone, idgaf! sooo adorable, I love this fic so much! I've needed this for so long, I can die happy now! you are doing such a great job, honestly, I love you
(also, is it bad that I want to see a bit grown up Ace beat someone up for making fun of him having two dads? the thought just came to me, and I feel like it makes me a bad person? hah, oh well, I never claimed to be good anyway)
looking forward to the next chapter! have a nice day/night/whatever it is where you are!
frappyrouge123 chapter 6 . 1/6/2018
i love this so much omg yessssssss

Finaly Ace said his first words awwwwwww. and spending a day with his gramps yess that was so good. i love this story so much i cant wait to read more if Aces time with his family! bye~
Sazky chapter 5 . 1/3/2018
awwww this is the most adorable thing ever! tiny baby Ace thinking he's actually saying an actual word and Marco being defeated (both by the absurdity of his son's first word technically not being a word and by the overwhelming adorableness of it), awwww, I honestly have no words for how incredibly cute this is, it makes me so happy!
(also, I'm totally gonna try to do this to my cousin's baby. she was born like almost two months ago now, and I don't see her anywhere near often enough for it to work, but I'm still gonna try it because I'm a bad person lol)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! have a nice day/night/whatever it is where you are!
frappyrouge123 chapter 5 . 1/3/2018
THIS IS WAS SO ADORABLE I CANTTT
i enjoyed reading this! hahaha Ace saying yoi xDD what did u expect Marco, you say that word in every single word u say xd it was inevitable that Ace would eventually pick it up hhaha.

i can't wait to read more! bye~
nequam-tenshi chapter 4 . 12/4/2017
This chapter may not be exciting but it's adorable! Well done!
Sazky chapter 4 . 12/4/2017
Tbh the first time I read "furry" I was horrified (why would Marco and Thatch let a f...lippin' FURRY of all people near their son) until I realised it would be Stefan lmao
overall super cute, I love tiny baby Ace being mad at his dads! and they're so heartbroken over it, aww I feel bad for them
(also, I'd probably die laughing if Ace's first word was yoi. a swear would be hilarious too but come on, it's YOI lol Marco says it waaaay too often not to rub off on Ace... but it's your story so I'll be happy with whatever you choose as his first word! just my two cents, because I love the idea, but don't let that influence you! do what you think is best!)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! have a nice day/night/whatever it is where you are!
ScaredyCheshireCat chapter 4 . 12/4/2017
Really cute
sdkop21 chapter 3 . 11/25/2017
OMG! I love this story! This has so much potential! Keep at it! oohhh, i have an idea and u can use this if u want to or not... if u do a sequel to this story after it's done, why not have either Marco or Thatch get pregnant?! lol that would be an awesome twist of a sequel! again, just an idea!
Sazky chapter 3 . 11/25/2017
yaaay, new chapter!
grandpa Whitebeard! the reaction is spot on! and I love how at the end he's all (there isn't an actual english word for it, there's only schadenfreude (or, in my mother-tongue, škodoradosť - both of which mean to laugh at somebody else's misfortune), but this definition sounds too harsh for what I'm trying to express by the word (which in itself, or at least škodoradosť, can have several degrees - from simple laughing when your best friend trips to full on being happy about someone's house burning down), so I'm using it in the sense of "Pops has gone through this already with all its ups and downs, and now he's, while excited that he has a grandson, slightly looking forward to watching his sons flail while they go through this all themselves") looking on with schadenfreude like yep, this is gonna be fun!
(sorry, that explanation got a bit out of hand... well, back to the review)
and! Ace is home at last! oh, this is going to be so much fun! (...I may be feeling a bit of schadenfreude myself lol)
as always, great job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! have a nice day/night/whatever it is where you are!
nequam-tenshi chapter 3 . 11/24/2017
That reaction from Pops was absolutely perfect! I wonder if baby Ace has that sweet baby smell? So adorable!
nequam-tenshi chapter 2 . 11/22/2017
I agree with everyone's positive reviews!

Pops Whitebeard *jumping up and down for an awesome grandpa*
Robin Social Worker (Did not expect that but it fits her: caring around children)

Wonderful job! I don't know what else to write since it seems that Sazky has said all that I feel about the awesomeness of your story!
Sazky chapter 2 . 11/22/2017
...I should probably buy a lottery ticket today. A little after midnight I find this great story I had been waiting for for years (almost no one writes Marco/Thatch which is just sad... and when they do it's usually angsty), I immediately fall in love, then resign myself to having to wait for updates for some time. An unreasonable amount of time later I go to sleep; I wake up, check my emails and the second chapter is out?! What is this sorcery?!
Seriously (gender-neutral-although-probably-female-identifying-judging-by-the-names-we-are-supposed-to-call-you) pal, I absolutely love you. Words can't describe how happy I am at this moment, I love this story, I love the way it's written (like the fact that they actually have to go through the whole reporting a found baby and subsequent official adoption process? usually people just keep the baby in fanfics (which is a crime...)! and the reactions are in character (or at least what we know of their characters) and there is actual progress! as in, in thought processes - the first reaction isn't immediately "let's adopt him", there is actual developement!) and (of course) I love you! keep being awesome (which basically translates to "you do you", since you already are awesome no matter what you do (unless you like make Ace die shortly after they adopt him which makes Thatch kill himself and Marco takes up drugs... an oddly specific example, I know, but I think you get the point))!
have a great day/night/whatever it is where you are!
(whoa, well this got out of hand... excuse my (basically word vomit) over-excited review, I just! love this story so much! and you as well!)
poemado chapter 2 . 11/22/2017
Really like this story. Would love to see some baby ace. I remeber in epsiode 0 that we see a baby ace that made dandan live hard. Can wait to see that.
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