No! Geez, now I'm getting emotional! Newt's in trouble now .. she's gonna kill him. After she's done crying her eyes out over the betrayal. I mean, I understand why he couldn't tell her, but still. It doesn't dull the hurt. The empty feeling after you lose something like someone's trust, or you realise that someone has told you that big of a lie .. put on that much of a face .. it's not nice.
Amazing chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Thank you for writing.

Gah, I got the notification as soon as you updated, but I forgot to read it then, so I read it now. I'm so happy you updated! Her moment with Gally was really sweet!

Aww. They're adorable.
Delighted to see a new chapter! Can't wait until the next one. Good luck composing it. Thank you for writing :)

Yes! Newtie getting some titty lmao. Anyway thank you so much for the update, every new chapter makes my days in quarantine so much better

Wwll done on the chapter. Good luck on the next one. Thank you for writing

I just got to the end of the story up to date. I loved it! It was an emotional rollercoaster. I feel like the MC was a bit unreasonable when Newt suggested she only become a Slopper for 2 days, but all the OC's do that. They don't see that the person in question is just trying to save them from something worse. It hurt when Jackson died. There are so many questions, like what did Newt say 'Talk to Jackson' for? Was there something that Jackson wanted to say to the MC? There were a few spelling mistakes, like a letter missed out here and there throughout, but apart from that it was very good. I can't wait to read more. Good luck with the next chapter! Thank you for writing.

Not gonna lie an update now would be great

Great story! Keep up the great work and update soon!

Update!

You monster! What a mf plot twist! I’m so sad she never got to talk to Jackson and hear his side of the story. Very interesting change curious to where this is going. And also bummed she didn’t get her name when they kissed corny but I really thought it would happen lol update soon!

Great chapter! I'm still waiting for Jackson to show up though...
I hope you're seeing my comments alright... They seem to pop up a few days after I post them for some odd reason...?
Anyway, update soon!

It's ok... you can shatter my heart to pieces... it's fine... Even though I feel a bit sorry for the House that they all, especially Gally, had build for her, I fully understand why she did that and I think that you showed her grief very good... Also the point that she doesn't want Newt to stay... he is the one she loves but even he can't console her when her very first and almost only friend dies...very well written. I hope the next chapters will not be this heart-wrecking

Update! Update! Update! Update!

Nooooo not Joe! I’m gutted I really liked his character you wrote him well! Where tf is Jackson she still hasn’t spoken to him! Good update can’t wait for more

What a great chapter! I was expecting it to be mostly a dialog between Jackson and her, but boi was I wrong. I really liked the way the kiss happened, and was quite disappointed when they didn't kiss the second time, but hey, there's still time for it to happen, right? Also I'm loving Lee being banished for what he did and I only hope Gally wasn't lying which I'm 100% positive he did not!
Lee's comment about her going through each of the guy was absolutely disgusting but not surprising on his part. Stupid of him though to say she's all over Newt as justification and proof of his words because if she was (is?) why would she invite Lee and not Newt. What a dumbass I swear...
I can only hope everyone will treat her like Siggy, Clint etc. And that she will talk to Jackson soon. Plus some extra time with Newt would be nice.
UPDATE SOON!