including that second SI really killed this story... he literally stole all the interactions from the MC...and it really makes him feel stagnated as all hell.

Sigh great story but no updates for more than 2 years

A pity I couldn't get more than halfway through the first chapter without cringing. First there is the bodies previous memories forcing him to act like the previous soul, but as if to spit on that you make the previous soul have no knowledge of remnant, you seem to have created this solely to make him follow a sketchy dude that you wouldn't have if he was an adult. And what really made me stop is how he is so sure they are pranking him when saying Mistral, Haven and Aura when he had just walked through a town that matches nothing he had known on earth, he was somehow expecting to be kidnapped and wake up half way across the world at midnight on the night he fell asleep. Finally when he realizes he de-aged, he was treating it like something that happens everyday, yet when someone mentions something like a mystical energy like Aura he laughs it off thinking they are stupid and pranking him WHEN HE LITERALLY BECAME YOUNGER!

Interesting enough semblance for James. Boring inclusion of a secondary character. No real conflict.

Sam, you're whipped I tell ya'.

Also the way you explained his power reminds me of quicksilver in the x-men film where wolverine goes to the past, and please gives him headphones where the only setting is time in a bottle by Jim Croce. That'd make my day.

So our man's limbo from warframe basically, just without the dimension stuff, in which case get a big gun that fires fast and you can kill hundreds in seconds, or a big semi auto/bolt action sniper (like a 50 cal) you could kill tonnes of people or just do tons of damage really quickly.

I was really starting to like this story, but then you go ahead and ruin it all. WHY DID U MAKE THE MC TELL RUBY HIS SEMBLANCE? I get that it's a way of making the plot more exciting, but it opens up way too many risks that actually make me annoyed. Im sorry, but I can't read this anymore.

MC is dumb as a bag of bricks, too stupid to live. There is also another SI in the story.

Very nice chapter. Very nice. Looking forward to the next!

I liked the chapter.

this sucks. well I wasn't too invested anyways. too little amount of character development and emotional scenes to make me attached. and I was always the type to just fanboy over OP, flamboyant, and Gary sue characters lmao.

Ok I really like this.
A shame that is not as popular as it is.
And nj with the pairing

It’s somewhat amusing how there’s a guy like you around my age that’s writing all this in his free time. And here I am crunching on Kit-kat bars lol.
Good on you, and I hope your college life goes swell!

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!