Hello please update soon I like the story! idk what I should suggest about the lady, but maybe make the maknae line close together and let the hyung line explain why they are tryimg to seperate them with good intentioms, and the lady will try something to jimin too but the hyung line and the other two maknes would go protect jimin?

Stop apologizing and saying it was crappy cuz its not! it was hilarious! ;)