another excellent abandoned story.

Its an excellent stlry, realy looking forward to how it progresses.

5 chapters in, and it doesn't appear Esdeath will be showing up anytime soon...try to keep in mind the reader's motivation to keep up with this story, but good on you for taking on this time fic challenge, hope it develops well

Please update soon, loved it has always

That was confusing as hell. But I guess that's the point. Either way I'm looking forward to another chapter.

It's good to hear that you'll finally update the story, for I was starting to wonder if you were just playing with me and the other readers. Anyways, I saw a comment from Godisme, and I know you're not going to do this because you're a smart man, and it doesn't look like you'll be taking a canon route, but I just wanna say that Aria is a fucked up girl. I wouldn't compare her to Esdeath, but she's fucking petty as hell and doesn't deserve redemption or anything like that, the girl literally tortured Sayo to death because she had "prettier" hair. Not to mention, she considered people from the country cattle, and shit. Smh, it annoys me sometimes when a reader tries to push their unrealistic beliefs onto the good authors.

Well, with that said, I look forward to your actual chapter. I'm curious how you will write this story, but I'm sure it'll be good.

From,
Revan.

Very stoked on this first chapter! Very hopeful for updates!

One story where Aria doesn't get killed please? Her death is so repeative and she doesn't need to die to advance the story; honestly its better off to spare her and take her prisoner in hope of rehabilition, still I bet you're going to go with 95% route of her getting killed and I'll remain in 3-4 stories where she is alive and breathing, one of which is my own

I've missed this storyyyy. I'm just getting around to the new updates, can't wait for more! :D

I just got bamboozled..

take your time man. but I am curious about why you weren't happy with the first rendition of chapter 5

Ah, it do be like that sometimes. Don't rush cause I know I'm not going anywhere lmfao

Man, is this what it's like to be my DxD readers? Getting notifications that I updated only to find out that it isn't a chapter or a chapter for another story? Seriously, every time I see the notification I think, "Oh shit, he finally updated." only to end up seeing an update about progress. It sucks.

P.S I would have done this on my account, but it turns out I can't, so I had to do this on a guest.

Замечательно, когда же вы выпустите продолжение в виде 5 главы?

I knew continuing to follow this story was the right thing to do! Keep going steady.

Yay! Merry Christmas to you too! Hope you well and Keep writing!