WHAT? WHAT! WHAT!?

I THOUGHT THIS WAS GOING TO BE A FULL STORY!

~Drunk

Please do a sequel. I love your story

MHHMMMMM, this is so good but what is SU earth gonna be like 200 years later, and what's up with Peridot and Amethyst? Did Lapis never come back? Get shattered? Harvested? Corrupted? Defect back to homeworld?

~Drunk

"- I get it. It's been two centuries"

They were gone for two hundred years! Steven, Jamie, Connie, Lars, Sadie and Onion's families must have been so heartbroken. It's a bit of a bittersweet ending, sure Stevonnie was reunited with the gems but their families are long gone. I hope you do a chapter where we see the reactions of beach city residents about the kidnappings. Wonderful chapter

This story has really caught my interest. I loom forward to seeing where you take this as Tevonnie is reunited with the other gems.

**Godzilla roar** MOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

~Drunk

Very interesting premise that I'm surprised more authors haven't tried. BUT, you might want to mention in the story description or top of the chapter that at least this chapter is written in second person, as such things can be a bit jarring for potential readers.

Anyhow your description oddly reminded me of a Native American tribe with talk of "nature spirits" and "their land". Good luck with this!

From what I guess, Steven, Connie, Sadie, Lars, Onion and Jamie were taken to the zoo and the children in the zoo are there descendants. Excellent chapter, please continue