The damage that attack cost

Makarov will Have to pay a lot again to fix it
Hahaha

They sound so emotionless when talking, try adding things like question marks, or exclamation marks. other than that it was pretty good!

What age is natsu in chapter1

i think its good but the story is moving too fast

For God's sake make someone put Gray in his place too annoying muleke, and make Erza grow logi to stop getting angry with Natsu

What a beautiful guild master to let a bunch of bad losers do it for free just because he defeated the guild darling well that you could have done Laxus teaching Gray something to be babac and it would be amazing if Natsu got cold with everyone in the guild afterwards of this.

Can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Love the story! My friends and I hope for more.

so he teleported out of the guild the minute she opened the doors you just got done having Makarov tell off the guild he cant be gone

if I was him id have left to their biggest rival after the way they treated him

your grammar is absolutely terrible but the story is good

I feel so bad for Natsu! Why can’t he just go into all out rage, destroy the guild, and leave Fiore?

Next

I feel like I've read this before HMMMM
I have a feeling this was stolen but I don't know for sure yet anyway this story is quite good keep up the work

Great chapter..