Reviews for I Never Realized How Small Konoha Was |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dude! Send help, I'm laughing way too much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo the first few line made me laugh out loud, I was actually waiting until something interesting happen to say something but as far as I can tell this story is pure gold. Thank you very much for sharing it with us. Have a great day |
![]() ![]() ![]() isnt taking off almost 3 years off her life a bit too much? i mean it just seems too excessive even for the curse mark |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. This is definitely one of the best stories I’ve read to date (despite the fact that mc seems a little overpowered) I’m really enjoying it, can’t wait to read the next part.. thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To the writer's credit, at least the grammar is perfectly fine- making the story very well written in a sense. ...But to beat a dead horse, the English 'eigo' straight up ruins every chapter it's brought up in by taking over the focus away from the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writer should've been better than this with the English language garnish bullshit. There is no logical reason to spread it or be able to teach it because English is, in itself, literally not consistently logical. The words are meaningless because the roots are meaningless because so much is loaned from different languages out of necessity. How would anyone ever explain why it's called English is beyond me, and seemingly the writer. I wouldn't care if it was just fan service for the very obviously English-speaking reader base, but later chapters (that were skimmed) just won't stop making it relevant. There's no detriment (that was skimmed) from all these stupid fucking lies needed to justify the foreknowledge cringe. It really doesn't matter in the end, because fan fiction will always be a victim of its reputation. There's no imperative for extraordinary works and no reason to demand them. It is what it is; just because it's... not very good, doesn't mean it shouldn't exist, ultimately. It's not like this wasn't written years ago. tl;dr: just turn your brain off. It's supposed to be fun. Supposed to be, anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story. You’ll see my face in your next one. |
![]() ![]() i really like your style of writing. hope you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a sudden and depressing temporary ending XD. I'll be looking forward to the rewrite Woot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fanfic is amazing! I love how well developed the characters are and how they have strengths and weaknesses. I can't wait to read the sequel :D |
![]() ![]() And the answer is Nope! She will leave you guessing until the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Normally the timeskip is 2-3 years... im intrigued |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...dawmn... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool I'll have to remember to do a re read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ummm... This is all a bunch of broken code. I hope I dont miss anything by skipping this chappy |