As long as Harry doesn’t make a harem and force hermione to be okay with it than I’m into this and can see the story continuing. But if he takes Ginny as a slave for them than I’m not into it at all. I’m curious to see how this Harry and hermione would change things.

Were the blowjobs really necessary? That's not what I was expecting to find.

I don't like that he didn't erase Ginny's memories of everything Tom and what she did to Harry. Than put her to sleep or stun her and than leave her somewhere. It's like she was rewarded in a way rather than punished.

Interesting story, please continue.

A minor point but Harry sees Ginny naked and gets a blow-job of her, then the following day you write “Harry stood there with open mouth, staring at his first ever near naked girl, and certainly the first real breasts he had ever seen.”

Good story maybe you could expand on it. Keep it up

can't wait for the next chapter

Oh I wish, you hadn't included that part about Ginny. The HHr section was great though.

Seems kind of uncharacteristically... bad... compared to your other work. Trashy even xD

Did you mean “a few loose ideas” (as in more than one loose idea)?
Whatever snapped inside of Harry, I’m in favour of it having done so.
Yay! for Harry having read Hogwarts: A history from cover to cover at least a couple of times. It’s funny that he kept that fact from Hermione, though. She is going to be pissed off at him once she finds out (a) that he had read Hogwarts: A history from cover to cover a couple of times; and b) that he never told her he did), though.
“he completely missed”, not “ he completely mist”.
I am so relieved that the Basilisk ate Tom Riddle junior, though, strictly speaking he/she/it (since I do not know the gender of the Basilisk) should eat the diary too.
“meantime” should be one word.
I don’t like all of these other girls lusting after Harry.
“the boys’ stairs”, not “the boy’s stairs”.
Yay! for whatever it is giving Harry the strength to carry Hermione all the way from the Hospital Wing to Moaning Myrtle’s bathroom.
“tailor-made” should be hyphenated.
“He increased the tempo”, not “He increase the tempo”.

excellent start

You should definitely continue this story i am not sure where you would take it from here but i could see a few more chapters with a threesome between harry hermione and ginny with ginny being a slave to the other two.

the last couple of days I have been less than pleased with some of the stories I have been reading, after reading a few that have basically either change a verb or noun from canon, you can understand why I was thinking of taking a break from reading HP series, then I opened your email with this new story. This is why I'm still reading, authors like you who take "a path less traveled ". I have you favorite/followed since 3/27/2014. When people ask what I am reading, ( I read way to much, but it is way better than TV) I inform them I reading amateur authors, the looks I get, are quite entertaining.

Awesome start!

Looking forward to more chapters

I thought this was great. I like how you advanced the ages. The idea of 11 year old Ginny Weasley is a bit yucky, beyond the whole Ginny Weasley level of yuckiness. I also am glad you cleared up the consensual/non consensual thing by making Hermione be in love with Harry, regardless of the potion.

I hope you continue this in the next few years. I also think the whole seeing from two sets of eyes would be pretty interesting if they had a threesome with Fleur. Talk about a lot of extra sensation. I also think you can basically do a couple more chapters right. Year 3 - he frees Sirius Black and comes into his inheritance as Heir Black - maybe get some more bad ass powers with rituals and the Black thing. And you can have the finale in Year 4 - where he enters the Tournament - hooks up with Fleur - and uses his accelerated intelligence/powers/awareness to destroy Voldie - now that he will be 16-17.

I do think this story has a lot of promise, both in terms of smut as well as chracter development. A more powerful freed Harry who can truly unlock all the cunning and powers he could have. I would also advocate more for Luna than Ginny, or just other witches in general. You can have Ginny just chase after Harry - while Harry and Hermione explore some other possibilities.