I finally caught up to the latest chapter! This has been a wild ride, and I'll admit I didn't like the idea of Remus and Alice having a relationship because it just was uncomfortable to read with a age gap. It's the same feeling I got when I read that Jacob imprinted on Renesme. But I can not see how people could say you condone child grooming. Was the relationship uncomfortable to read about? Yes, it was at least to me.

However, in any case I hope your senior year of high school goes smoothly! I hope to stay caught up with this fantastic crossover!

I don’t understand why someone is saying you support child rape or grooming or anything linked to it as your Alice/Remus relationship is hardly mentioned apart from the odd flashback and as you said it is more like the beginning of what I guess could be the Jacob/Renesmee relationship in that nothing is done.

I have been talking to you for a while now and you don’t strike me as a person to support the sort of stuff you are being accused of.

I love your fanfiction and think that the past of Alice & Remus was well thought and written out. It also explains a lot about the start of her & Jaspers relationship in where they truly get to know each other before they seem to get more intimate but at the same time we do not get any details as they are both private people!

Though I would like a little more Peter & Charlotte soon though :-D

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Another lovely chapter, thanks for posting!

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Thank you for the update! I really enjoy your story. But I am disappointed that Jacob will still imprint on the baby. It’s not because of age (I have no problem with the gap) but because it means Alice will probably reconcile with the Cullens soon. I liked how Alice was decisive of where her limit was. And at this point the only who apologized and really meant it- in my opinion- is Edward but even he doesn’t change his attitude. Now it feels that despite how poorly they treated her she’ll still end up forgiving them soon. I don’t mind forgiveness, but I will be disappointed if they don’t make it up to her and mean it. And I still would think it’s a good idea to separate. Just my opinion.

Thanks again for the chapter!

Hi I'm the guest you mentioned what I meant is that he claimed to love Bella then he ends up with her daughter that's what I meant by sick not the age difference I meant going from mother to daughter and not trying to fight it.

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Please tell me that Jake won't imprint on the baby and that it really is an immortal child cos I hated the whole Renessmee thing.

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It’s interesting how you’re keeping in time with the actual storyline of Twilight. I like how it’s all falling into place. I hope that you don’t make it so everything works out like it did in Twilight though, considering your plot is that the Cullens are jerks to Alice and don’t treat her right. Or that Edward sudden loves the child cause he can hear her. Anyways, I’m really excited to see where this story goes and how Alice lives her life, hopefully free of the Cullens. Thanks for the update!

This is good I hope that the child really is an immortal child unlike in twilight I really don't want Jake to imprint on the child cos when I read that in the books and watched it happen in the movies I thought that it was sick. I mean Jake wanted Bella and then he imprints on her daughter yeah just no. Sorry for the ramble. Looking forward to the next update.

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NOPE-OH-DOOM! Alice Cullen was born in 1901 there-dooming-fore she must be the daughter of Sirius Black the second and not Harry's godfather Sirius Black the third.