Reviews for The Order |
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CelendilAU chapter 6 . 3/28 I find myself very much wondering where this might have gone. I love the set up a lot, the mysterious Hadrian and mr Bishop.. also how would the Japanese school have arrived? (Hey we can’t all just ponder the big things, right?!) |
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 6 . 3/13 And it end as another junk |
tricorvus chapter 1 . 11/6/2019 Oh I like this different angle beginning Rock on |
Q.Elwyn.D chapter 4 . 3/30/2019 If there was one complaint I had about this story, it's how Hermione's injury seemed forced when you look at canon. The only truly injured person you see around is Mad-Eye, and that's referenced as being because of dark curses that strictly can't be healed. Unless she was left there for days, at which point it seems more likely she would have died, the seeping into magical memory doesn't seem right. I get that it's supposed to show off the prejudice and cruelty of the magical world, but I hate how it forcibly cripples and relegates her to nothing more than a research role, seemingly permanently, when it doesn't make much sense with known, canon, magical cures. And then there's the fact she was sent to Saint Mungos, when they never seemed to bother no matter how injured anyone else got. That's just weird. Q.E.D |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 6 . 2/25/2019 Too bad the story is on hiatus. |
jdboss1 chapter 6 . 2/17/2019 this was a good one it look like your stop updats this love to see a ch7 |
Ironmonger chapter 6 . 1/30/2019 I love this story. Noticed its been a year since update. Hopefully twre is more to come! |
mickeymauser123 chapter 6 . 10/21/2018 Oh my lord, please continue this! I love it and it actually follows the Harry Potter-Verse superbly (schools) while also branching out (spells scientifically analyzed). |
Pointer3109 chapter 6 . 10/11/2018 A fun read. Pity its likely dead. Uncivilized or uncultured is a serious insult in several countries across the globe. Enjoyed it. |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 6 . 9/3/2018 A great story here so far! Looking forward to reading more! |
GBTtown chapter 6 . 8/22/2018 This story is so intriguing! Who is Tobias? MI-5 3/4? Something tells me Hadrian will know some of the Japanese contingent. I obviously like the story and would like to see it updated some day. |
Sam239 chapter 1 . 5/10/2018 more please |
Jarvey chapter 6 . 4/30/2018 :D |
Navn Ukjent chapter 6 . 1/21/2018 Interesting start on this fic. I do wonder what happed to Quirrel and the Stone in the first year, and with the diary, Ginny and the basilisk in the second year. |
EmmSea chapter 6 . 1/11/2018 I just got around to reading this most excellent story. The details are being teased out in a well written, easily readable form. I'm keenly anticipating future chapters. |