| Reviews for The Hands Of Fate Turn Once More (discontinued) |
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   noplaynogame3 chapter 8 . 9/1 continue please |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/11/2019 best DxD story on this site and it's abandoned? There is no justice in this world. |
| fluffy-fanfic-lover chapter 7 . 3/4/2019 please update soon |
| benjamin chapter 8 . 1/21/2019 excelente histori continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...continuala...esta genial |
| Jessica9906 chapter 8 . 1/1/2019 Great i love it When will we continue? |
| Jessica06 chapter 8 . 1/1/2019 great i love it When will we continue? |
| iStyx chapter 2 . 11/14/2018 And you lost me at the moment you blocked Naruto's powers. That just doesn't make sense and lazy authors use this shit just for some contrived drama later. No, thanks, there are already hundreds of stories with this goofy crap. |
| cain221 chapter 8 . 10/9/2018 love it can't wait for your next update. |
| TheBlackEntity chapter 8 . 9/22/2018 plz update soon |
| Loquin chapter 8 . 9/19/2018 Very good chapters!, very good story! |
| dlowe265 chapter 8 . 9/12/2018 Update soon |
| Monster King chapter 8 . 7/4/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon. |
| Hexmaster23 chapter 8 . 6/3/2018 The story is quite decent but your writing just feels well to put it bluntly inexperienced like this is the very first time you wrote fanfiction or something. I mean from my perspective I feel that there are no major problems with the story so far but something just feels off or not right if you know what I mean. |
| YoMama chapter 7 . 5/24/2018 Sooooooo, why did Naruto and Kuroka left Shirone behind? Because other than forcing canon to happen no matter what, I don't see how nor why that would happen... |
| YoMama chapter 5 . 5/23/2018 That whole spiel of "giving the knight piece to somebody who focuses on strength would go against their nature" is so childish and shortsighted that is not susprising it appears in a DxD fic, cue the sigh... First off, if you were to give the knight speed boost to a naturally powerful fighter you actually would give them a solid enhancement because you would be making the much more well-rounded and could possibly be covering a potential weakness in their style, just look at the Perfetc Cell vs USS Trunks fight, what's the point of having all the strength in the world if you lack the speed and mobility to actually hit your opponent? Besides, Force equals Mass times Acceleration, by giving the knight piece to a innately physically strong individual you're also giving them the perfect tool of adding even more juice to their strikes, so yeah, your Naruto's supposedly wise advice that come with experience is actually pretty bad and could lead Rias into having very limited and one-dimensional fighters, then again that's exactly what almost every DxD character is so... |
