Ok, I'm going to be honest here. I know I said earlier that I really liked this, and I still kinda do, but only up to 6-7 chapters in. I can't remember the exact approximation, but when Lila was introduced, or basically the second arc. I know there was ways for the characters to grow or have their flaws shown or whatever, but this just made everything go downhill in my perspective. Yes, I do know that this was important for them because Lila is scheming and kinda crazy, but this story is rated k. For the things that go down once she's introduced and after/during the third arc, this should either be rated teen with a warning at the beginning of chapters that have mature content, or be rated M. Honestly, what happens if some young, probably pretty innocent kid goes on here to read stuff and their restrictions are ratings and k and k? They might find this story and go, "Oh! This kinda sounds interesting, _and_ it's only rated k? Oh, heck yeah I'm going to read this!" And then they get to whatever mature moment and they either stop reading, or lose their innocence. That's not okay. This not being appropriately rated is not okay. I'm hoping after this I see the rating change or something, because there is no warning whatsoever before not okay things go down in this. It makes me sad that you felt the need to put that content into what was and still is pretty well written stuff. I really like this story before, spent like, a week and a half reading up to where I was, even tried to skip over the bad parts and give it the benefit of the doubt, but after what you wrote that our two main characters do, I'm good. I don't need to read that and suffer through it, so I won't. You won't be seeing any more reviews from me, but I hope you take my advice on the rating change. You could probably get in big trouble for posting something far beyond the k rating.

Nooooooo... no. I wanted to be able go to sleep in peace but now I'm sad. Whyyy. Ahhhhhh. Dang it sauce! ;m; Now I just feel really, really sad. Everything was going so wellll. Whyyyy. Sweet cinnamon roll, what have you done? What have you done? /\

This is really good. I'm only on chapter 8, but dang! This is written amazingly well. The idea is so unique and I just love it! It's honestly hard to sleep when all I want to do is read this. I love everything about it. Everything seems realistic, nothing really strays from seeming like a logical reaction or action. Every misfortune makes sense and aids so much in the storytelling. I can't help in root for the characters, and with this story, I feel more attached than ever to fictional beings. From one or two chapters ago I noticed the author's note about when the story would be over, and seeing where it is chapter wise now makes me sad that it's getting close, and yet exciting. This is one crazy adventure that I really appreciate. This deserves more attention and reviews because it really is a work of art. With that said, I am excited to read more and hope that I will make the time to review more after chapters. Thank you.

I read this story religiously for a while and then got busy. I love it so much!

Take all the time you need, we'll wait for you pass the exam

Each new chapter has been amazing, not at all of a disappointment, please don't be so critical of yourself! Thank you for the pleasure of this story, if is beautifully done, very well planned, well written, creative and addicting! I've read it twice since finding it 5 months ago, the details and heart make it so worth it. Best wishes with your exam and balancing life in general!

I was so excited to see a new chapter! Somehow this glimpse into the past raised more questions than it answered and hinted at things that are making me want to reread everything again just to see what I missed! I have loved every bit of this story. It's beautifully thought out and written, original and captivating, sweet and painful in a lovely balance. Thank you for all of the time you have given us as your readers, it has been an absolute pleasure to read this story and I'm looking forward to rereading it again in the future! (Many times over I suspect as it is complex enough to still be intriguing even though I've already read it twice this year!) Great job! Many thanks:).

And so...I didn't realize how invested I was in this story until chapter 12 when I decided I hated Adrien and Lila and couldn't decide if I appreciated or loathed the way you wrote this chapter. I also couldn't decide if I would keep reading or go find something fluffy and sweet to enjoy...enter Nino. Thank you for saving this story. Your writing style seems to be changing slightly with each chapter becoming better written and more immersive, I'm impressed. The thought you have put into this story and the world behind it are amazing. Very well done!

I liked the positive tone you ended on. The earlier angst had my stomach twisting on itself, but I feel much better after that ending. I’m glad Marinette is taking some time before forgiving Adrien - he did a lot of things I wouldn’t forgive. But I am an Adrinette fan, so I can’t help but cheer for them. I’m already looking forward to your next chapter.

Well that just ruined the story for me, i hate it when they say they love someone and then have a fight and so they turn around and screw someone else, it just ruins the whole story for me.

... *squints* Is that a Cardcaptor Sakura reference I see?

This was an intense chapter. I wasn’t sure how you were going to get Marinette and Lila to be civil to each other, and it turns out they weren’t, which is quite believable. I’m a little scared for your next chapter becuase I don’t see things being comfortable between Adrien and Marinette after this, and it’s understandable. It’s going to take a lot of work on Adrien’s part even if he thought he was doing good.

Oh wow...that's just wow, in a good way though.

3 AMAZING!

Good. Lila is gone. Let us move on!