you know what, this is really breaking my hurt how sasuke hiding all the things from naruto , and im a little bit disapointed with sasuke

I'm at a loss for words right now, I've typed this review 3 times and erased it... all I can say is wow. I'm jumping to the sequel as soon as my mind can calm down. this story was absolutely amazing even though it gave me a HUGE anxiety trip the entire time. thank you for writing this was a. womderful read

I accidentally read the Prison Years one first...

Great read! I will definitely continue reading this series!

Great Story. Absolutely loved it

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Good story. Unfortunately I have to stop reading it because Sasuke behavior is too fucked up and makes me too stressed out. But I made it through 24 chapters and I did enjoy it. I hope Sasuke fucks off (and itachi beats his ass) and Naruto raises his child with someone who gives a fuck but I know how it's going to end XD. Wishful thinking.

God I hate Sasuke. Naruto just needs to leave his stupid bitch ass

OMG Sasuke is being a bastard, like super bastard! TTTT I pity my Naruto... while he made a mistake when he's drunk and tried his best to pay for his mistake, Sasuke on the other hand didn't want to stop and feel so little regret... isn't it cheating? D:

and, where are you going to go with the plot? I'm frustated... lol~ i was waiting until Sasuke's being caught... bad me... anyway good work, now i'm going to check the sequel~

wow, what a journey. I can't believe sasuke. he doesn't even consider why itachis health is shitty, and I hope that madara won't tell him bulls hit about his brother. on the other side, I'm glad that neuro stays away from drugs from now on, because sasuke has a serious problem and doesn't need someone to understand but someone to help him...

first..you give me heart attack for "c" right before the number of review, then i scroll to the end, and...oh okay and start to read from start and found it, yeaayy! thanks!

that is! the sasuke from the first time of the story, not just the money, drugs, and sex lover. but now i get anxious, the two of them now under the spotlight, i think there will be a lot suprise, hardly to wait but i must wait and enjoy the ride. thanks for your good work.

I think that sasuke loss his way come on what on the name of hell is he doing? And really karin, suigetu and even juugo are bad news such a ban influence normaly I like those three but here they are just pushing down sasuke even more in fact it was Karin who put him in that world in the first place I don't know why they just not disappear from his life although I think that would be sad for sasuke they are his only friends, another thing that I don't understand is the attitude of itachi now a known the reason why sasuke was so afraid to tell him that he was pregnant seriously get to hit him when he is recovering from a rape and a c-section that is wrong, was he always that abusive? with good reason sasuke is so bad in the head, I mean if you brother hits you in that situation that other men hit you when they are paying well... its just normal for sasuke right? and the whole tink of naruto candidate i mean If there is something that does not fit in this story, it is definitely the whole story of Minato president and at the same time a normal family father, come on I know that this is just fanfic but in the real world Naruto would be surrounded by bodyguards and journalists 24/7 centuries ago the world would know about Sasuke and especially of his daughter, you do not give enough importance to the positions of president and mayor and now I suppose that the photos they took of Sasuke in the last chapter are going to become a problem, well, as long as naruto does not return with neji for convenience all good i guess, and really I think that sasuke has something strange because he is still no sizing all the seriousness of what he is doing is like he was still alien to the real world and the consequences of his actions

Sasuke's best quality used to be that he was selfless. He became an escort to save Itachi's life, even though he didn't like escorting. He refused to date Naruto, even though being with Naruto could've made his life easier, because dating an escort would have been bad for Naruto. Even when he was breaking up with Naruto for cheating on him, he still acted selflessly by suggesting Naruto try dating Neji and seeing if they still had something between them.

It's really tough seeing the person he's become now because he's incredibly selfish and impossible to like. Is it the depression? Possibly, although the story doesn't do a good job linking his behavior to the depression, so readers (judging by the reviews you've gotten) have a hard time empathizing with what he's doing and why he's doing it. He's a rape victim who's had a terrible life, we should all feel terrible for him, yet many readers (most readers?) don't, which shows how far down the story has dragged him. How do you not feel sorry for a rape victim?

It doesn't help that the story has created a sort of adversarial situation between Naruto and Sasuke where Naruto is outdoing Sasuke's earlier selflessness and working his fingers to the bone trying to help Sasuke and his family, while Sauke is wronging them all with his actions. In this situation, readers are basically forced to take Naruto's side and feel sorry for him and hate Sasuke for what he's doing to him.

I fear that the damage that's been done to Sasuke is so bad that even when he starts acting better, readers still won't care whether or not he gets a happy ending. (If you even plan for him to act better and get a happy ending, that is. At this point, that's looking doubtful.) He's had so many opportunities to come clean and tell Naruto the truth, yet he's avoided them all. Putting Naruto first and facing the consequences of his actions is his only hope at redemption, yet I fear Sasuke will be found out (Itachi will find the briefcase, the pictures will be exposed) and Sasuke's one legitimate shot at redemption will be lost. It's the difference between showing he's truly sorry by acting on his remorse now, or merely showing that he's sorry he got caught by waiting to make amends after he gets exposed. After what happened with Naruto, Sasuke should know how bad it feels to be on the other side of a deception.

It was understandable why Naruto wouldn't tell Sasuke the truth about Neji, but it's not understandable why Sasuke won't tell Naruto the truth about this. He'd previously told Naruto he wanted to get his old job back with Orochimaru after he had the baby. It's not like it would have been a surprise if he told him at the beginning that he's gone back to escorting. So why all the lies and deception?

The story gives the impression that Sasuke escorts now for the money and the pleasure of sex. He revels in having it all: baby, boyfriend, money, and sex. Is it trauma and depression making him do it, or is he just that selfish? I'd like to think it's because of trauma, but I can only form an opinion based on what I've been shown, and the story isn't making a connection between Sasuke's actions and his psychology, so he just ends up looking like an asshole.

I certainly didn't expect that. I feel it's way too soon. why rush things like that? it's also irresponsible of his dad I mean he knows naruto has stress with his baby and now the stress of a campaign is added to that :o just crazy. and u can't help but think that of course sasukes past is gonna be revealed to the public and worse that it's not actually his past but his current occupation