Reviews for Flames of the Soul
Victoria1676 chapter 11 . 6/20
please make more I love this story! X3
kiitsunequeen chapter 4 . 4/11
He is definitely a cloud
CAD270895 chapter 11 . 8/20/2019
more please
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2019
cool
Kian Xki chapter 7 . 6/10/2019
while your logic of guardians is good and 'fall back and rethink stragy acceptable

there is something WRONG in a funamental level in the idea that Lord Death would allow the mafia to join his ranks, sure Flame Actives are a bonus but the allowance of a criminal group would merelly mean that said criminals would go to DWMA for training and latter go back to itally (or anywhere else) to abuse their power ultimatelly making the original problem of Kishin even worst

how long would it take for a criminal to simply say screw it and eat the soul of inocents?

wouldn't in this case Flame Actives become nothing more than a lesser version of Witches that attempt to infiltrate and convert your forces? a parasyte that drains your streng to increase it's own?

say "no" to vongola, do not allow their sweet words and charisma to blind you with their lies, the life of a mafia is a criminal one, one that can only find blood and suffering of the inocent to fill the lust, pride and greed of the guilty

even the idea "I Can change it from withing" is nothing but the delusion of a fool who has already giving up in following the path of true good
Guest chapter 5 . 5/21/2019
Great story.
I really like what you done so far whit Tsuna characterization. I also like what you choose for her weapons. I'll be honest, seeing you go with a sword and shield I kind want to see one of their soul resonances to change it from classic to the style of charge blade from monster hunter.
roanoak chapter 11 . 4/30/2019
Is Viper the Dragon Witch.
It explains the Hordimg of Gold to the point of Destruction, the Flight, and the Affinity for Xanxus
VanillaRosemary chapter 5 . 4/29/2019
I’m not to thrilled about the weapons, personally I think the gauntlets would’ve been truer to Tsuna.
But that’s the only thing I’m upset about your doing a great job with the story!
PikaMew1288 chapter 4 . 4/24/2019
I'd really like to see a fic where Lord Death has a daughter (Maybe a Blood-Adopted Fem Harry?) just to see the antics that she would get up to and Death's headaches with trying to deal with it (imagine how awkward Death having to give The Talk to his daughter would be).
PikaMew1288 chapter 2 . 4/24/2019
I hope that Tsunami says "Screw Vongola" and, to be honest, any smart person would do so seeing as it was the Ninth Generation that screwed everything up so, the Tenth Generation doesn't deserve to have to spend their entire lives fixing the Ninth's idiotic mistakes.
Dreamer Rose chapter 11 . 4/23/2019
... I can't wait for Black Star's reaction to the fact that his sister is dating Death the Kid!
merendinoemiliano chapter 11 . 4/22/2019
Simple,but nice fight, can't wait for more
NightBringer325 chapter 11 . 4/22/2019
Love the fact even Stein is like yeah not going to happen to Reborn over the whole convince her to join the Vongola and he hasn't actually met her yet so that says a lot about her dislike for the Mafia.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/30/2019
The shield and sword are a nice option, and the way they fell out works really well. Female lions are the ones who do the hunting, after all, so Sarabi as the Sword is very appropriate. Male lions mostly fight with each other for Alpha rights and generally if the pride is under attack, and otherwise laze around, eat, and sleep, so becoming a Shield suits, as it doesn't move as much, strapped to her arm and all, and is a defensive weapon that can still do damage.

It's also nice to not have the phallic association of a male and a sword for once.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30/2019
*amusement* There's the likeable reckless idiot who means relatively well (at least some of the time) and the utterly incompetent moron who should not be allowed to hold authority over a bucket of slugs let alone be a parent. We like Black Star despite his reckless behavior and sometimes less-than-brilliant strokes of "brilliance", we hate Iemitsu despite his occasional glimpse of decency because when it comes down to it he did a hell of a lot of unforgivable bad no matter his intentions and doesn't even comprehend that he screwed up or why it is such a big deal.
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