You’re retarded all your story’s are retarded and you were dropped on your head as a baby

Bad start hope it gets better

How did they get engaged? I’m sor confused, I like the idea. I don’t see little to no character interactions. It could have been written better, I feel like she would have mentioned that she was engaged to Natsu. Natsu would have been confused then. I like the idea, but the progression isn’t very good.

Try rewriting it with more detail and better scenarios. The dialogue is weird too, very short and choppy. Again not trying to flame, but I like the idea.

I like the idea and story but the way youre writing it suucks

I like this story but if I see the word “said” one more time, I’m gonna lose it.

Good chapter please make more chapters because this story is interesting

WTF did I just read?
Look, as much as it was confusingly written, I still enjoyed the story. Keep working hard and you'll improve in no time!

Why does he suddenly call her his fiance? ... don't answer that

Isn't natsu too OP.

not trying to be messed up buy u really need to fix ur grammar.

Funny stuff this chapter

Nice chapter

Nice