Reviews for Brightest in the Dark |
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Foalan21 chapter 8 . 1/17 Exceptional! gloriously well done! I eagerly await the next chapter. |
Natsu Draglogia chapter 1 . 12/9/2019 Endless sea of vex? Easy. Arc bolt hunter grenade with lucky raspberry equipped. Infinite vex vs. infinite arc bolt grenades. |
Kenny9x3 chapter 8 . 11/30/2019 I was really getting into this. PLEASE continue this when/if you find the time. |
red october700 chapter 8 . 12/16/2018 Ok this is a good chapter. So if Ruby is to be a gardian, I say break the mold. She should be a titan instead of a hunter. Thorn orignaly belonged to a Titan so it would make sence that he would have titan gear stored in his memory and recordings to teach her how to titan. Like I said break the mold. do somthing to stand out be unique. Again this is just me and I personly think it would be cool. |
MacrotheAcro chapter 8 . 11/17/2018 Damn! Hopefully she survives, or becomes a Guardian. Looking forward to the next installment! |
ranjira1988 chapter 8 . 10/22/2018 this is pretty epic .. cant wait to see more... |
GuardianRubyRose chapter 8 . 9/17/2018 Can Thorne still “Feel” their Old Guardian? If Ruby does become a Guardian. - Will she be a Hunter? (She’s got the look w/ the cape...Cayde will be so proud). - Will she have access to Hunter abilities? (Personally, I think she still may not be able to because that’s something that’s powered by Light, which comes from the Traveler. Thorne may be successful in reviving her this ONE time, but then needs a recharge... especially after reviving and connecting with someone who was not originally intended for Thorne.) According to Lore, Shin Malapur, had “some of the Traveler’s Light” that’s why he was able to become a guardian. I think it basically meant he had a strong spirit because normal humans in Destiny doesn’t have supernatural powers. Not like Ruby does... I think Thorne was mainly successful (Hoping) because Ruby had a strong spirit, in other words, a powerfully trained Aura which is generated by the Soul. According to Destiny, even the soul or “spark of life” is made of the same substance as the Light. Which brings me to my final point... since this is a crossover, will Ruby go to the Last City at any point? All of my points have led up to this one question. Because I love your story and I love how you are trying to make the “science” of both worlds make sense. Ruby would basically become the Player Guardian and it makes sense why she would be special because she’s an anomaly with powers and skills normal Humans or Guardians ever thought possible... a possible point of reference where this transition occurs is of course up to you, but there a certain points in the RWBY canon where certain powers causes potential rift in realities and Ruby gets sucked in... of course, I’m sure you’d make it more tasteful and subtle than just that... honestly, so many people have done that, and I’m sick of it! I’m pretty sure you’ll think of something believable... Of course, that’s just my wish and something I hope you intend to keep in mind! Great chapter, better story! |
Acuriousreader chapter 8 . 9/17/2018 Is this going to be a shin malphur or a shinobu situation |
OnePunchPlayer chapter 8 . 9/16/2018 And~ So, 'Guardian Ruby Rose' has been Risen! Be Brave all of you. |
Bagrat chapter 8 . 9/16/2018 OH MAN, I'M LOVING THIS. |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/16/2018 Osiris somewhere? |
SmoothedBeast36 chapter 8 . 9/16/2018 Another great chapter with an amazing Star Wars quote from Salem. Good call my young padawan. |
BraveSeeker3 chapter 3 . 9/15/2018 Dawnblade Wizard? I think you meant Warlock. |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/13/2018 Will Ruby become a Guardian? I ask this because of "Shin Malphur" Shin_Malphur |
OnePunchPlayer chapter 7 . 9/2/2018 Such Arrogance our enemies have~ If we can cut down Oryx, so too you will fall Cronus! [Loads up my Gjallarhorn along with million other Guardians with their own Gjallarhorns behind me~] (So, is Thorne (Thorn? Thorne?...I don't know.) going to transfer it's Light to Ruby making her a Risen? Like Shin Malphur with Jaren Ward's Ghost.) |