Well... I suppose this was the prime example of a 'Gary-Stu' Story.

I can't stand anymore of this selfrighteusness. While I hate MCs that talk all about making friends and helping others, this Harry is simply abusing his power and being generally an ass. He is patting himself for his actions, but in reality he didn't achieve anything - he uses the power that was basically given to him to humiliate everybody around him and they all silently take it. I understand taking out the enemies, but he didn't need to be so smug and gryffindorish about it.

Harry REALLY is a true Slytherin!

Loved it so far!

I love that Harry has finally begun to show how powerful he really is, I think he will benefit greatly from it

Where did you learn the word "drug"? They didn't teach it to you in school, since the only time it's a valid word in English is when you're referring to a substance used to affect the body in some way. If you're talking about forcibly pulling a person or thing, the word is dragged. D. Not drug. Present tense is drag, past tense is dragged. None of the tenses is drug. None. Never.

Sequel plz

this chapter makes zero sense

I am so offended. I don't like over powered Harry but i've read some that were well written. This, this is just ughh

I’m a little confused by the chain of power here... Dumbledore and Voldemort are Mages and they’re supposed to be amazingly powerful individuals that stand well above everyone else in the UK, maybe even the world. Yet in that guild, you just rattle of family after family, the WEAKEST of which were Mages and all of whom could have, at the least contested and at the best decimated Voldemort. It completely contradicts the past, invalidating the fear Voldemort somehow amassed and the divinity Dumbledore managed to feign.

Also... beautiful though she may be, Morgana is his many-times-great-grandmother. Yuck.

Only problem is a minor one, in that you tend to seesaw on things. The most recent example would have to be Tonks... first she didn’t even humour the idea of being intimate with him, making it seem like he was just having fun. Then she was in denial despite her obvious interest and attraction, making it seem like something would come of it, even if not much. You even went as far as saying her parents approved. Next mention you give of her is that she formally rejected him, apparently not having any interest in him at all and finding his advances to be nothing more than a bother. You did the same with Hermione, albeit having an actual reason to end that. You’ve done it with his dealings with Dumbledore, Snape and Amelia, and you’ve been inconsistent with his studies. At one point you said Harry got his NEWTs in potions and was working on his mastery with Slughorn, but soon after you said he was only just reaching seventh year potions and would get his NEWTs soon (he only just got them in this chapter).

Like I said, they’re mostly inconsequential in the grand scheme of things but it gets a little frustrating. Especially with the romantic relationships, as there’s no point in adding such a brief, irrelevant side story. I’m hoping it’s a foreshadow and she’ll eventually turn around, but I doubt it.

bonne fic!
c'était un peu trop facile pour harry.

Thanks

Good work! I hope your life takes a turn for the better!