Reviews for How To Catch Some Brats |
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Agent BM chapter 6 . 12/20/2017 IM not sure what to think of this ending to be honest |
Agent BM chapter 3 . 12/6/2017 So Mocho and cinnamon wear diapers when they sleeep? Didn’t see that coming. And that doll, what did it do to Anna? What’s going on here? Only time will tell I guess |
I'm Reader-anon chapter 3 . 12/5/2017 Cinnamon was pretty blunt with the explanation, wasn't she? How did Anna, Cinnamon's longest friend, not know about this though? The two really must keep so many things a secret so much that almost no one outside of their family knows anything about them. Also, I like the horror theme here. Kinda reminds me of a particular game, especially with the cassette. Let's just see if "Papa" will appear here as well |
Agent BM chapter 2 . 12/3/2017 This is getting interesting |
Agent BM chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 Great start |
I'm Reader-anon chapter 1 . 12/2/2017 Beware of the pony, a demon lays asleep in its head, Should you wake up to face him, he would make sure that your fate is death, He came one night, as the children played their game, Their first question for it, "What is your name?" The spirit didn't answer, it merely made fun of the poor kids, After a while, one fell ill, the son of Kit, After more questions, the group felt a growing anger, But so did the demon, ready to show the the vengeance it hungered, One by one, the toys flew from the shelves, An assault by toys, it wanted to show them hell, The children retreated to another room in the castle, sensing the danger, this sleepover may not have been worth the hassle. Left in the room, the spirit laughed at his efforts and deeds, "Those children will die, just you wait and see." Anyway, I may know where this is going. However, I still really want to see how this plays out. Please keep it up. |