Reviews for The Light Of The Moon
Starco4everr chapter 4 . 5/20
When will you update new chapters? It's been long time without publishing
Starco4everr chapter 4 . 12/6/2019
Please update more. I love your story
Guest chapter 4 . 4/3/2019
This chapter was amazing. You really covered the relationship between Tom and Marco effectively. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Phantomfray chapter 4 . 3/22/2019
Marco fire powers :)
Guest chapter 4 . 2/10/2019
Great story! Can you continue it, please?
DragonReaperKing chapter 4 . 11/3/2018
Good so far update soon please
Resurrection99 chapter 4 . 9/3/2018
This hit me hard I love this
Guest chapter 4 . 5/15/2018
Guys don't talk about their feelings like this with their friends, ever. Was cute and all, but it just never goes down like that. Not trying to be mean, just telling you from a dude's perspective. It would have made more sense if they were doing something physical, like playing ping pong (I'm sure you remember that episode) while talking, since dudes communicate more physically than emotionally anyway. It's just how it is. Good story though. Have a good day!
Mr. Haziq chapter 4 . 4/18/2018
Nice to see such a beautiful bromance...
Agenais chapter 4 . 3/31/2018
More. Do not let this story go unfinished
Goldey9058 chapter 4 . 3/26/2018
Is this ever continuing? This is a really great fic that I like. Thanks for making this, I hope you make more!
Dark spirits chapter 4 . 3/23/2018
This a a great story great job can wait to see where you go with this.
bleachdreamer0 chapter 4 . 3/6/2018
Awesome story. It’s got some great character development and relationship dynamics. I’m loving what you’ve done so far.
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 2/12/2018
Okay you need to hurry with the next chapter or two. This fic to me is like the Dinner with Buff Frog and Marcocrushed fics. Super deep and plays the heart strings like an acoustic guitar. Also love the Marco Tom Friendship you got going on. Bout time we got some good bromance between them. I'd love to read the reaction on Star's face when Tom ditches her a bit to hang and spar with Marco. You totally got it all, bromance with Marco and Tom, friendship with Ponyhead since she remembered his birthday, and a bit of romance drama with Star. Maybe have Tom show Marco around the underworld sometime pretty sure a few cute demon girls will be all over him for being a Human and pals with the prince of demons. Maybe have one or two of Ponyhead's sisters flirting obviously with him. Also with Heckapoo for goodness sake just have her kiss him. Marco's one of those guys that you have to be direct with. I wouldn't be surprised if Kelly made a move. That would be drama, but also some romantic rivals for Star.
Gold Testament chapter 2 . 2/12/2018
I can imagine what's going to be some reactions. Tom, and Kelly would be extremely disappointed, as would Moon and River would actually cry for Marco on that. Pony on the other hand would be furious and maybe bonk Star on the head a few times with her horn. Though everyone will be shocked when Tom yells to Star "I WAS FURIOUS AND WANTING TO WASTE HIM FOR NOT EVEN INVITING ME TO HIS BIRTHDAY PARTY THINKING HE DIDN'T WANT ME AROUND!"
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