Reviews for The Gang: IN-ACTION! |
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Commander 31 chapter 170 . 9/27/2019 170 pages and 4 favorites... am i dreaming |
Tiktokfan chapter 4 . 7/11/2019 Spectacular start to your story, friend! I hope this continues onwards. |
tiktokfan chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Great start to a story. |
Wildebunny the Eternal chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 The only thing entertaining about this story is why I came here: The author was so mad about the two reviews that they complained on Twitter asking Fictionpress to remove spam. I will reaffirm the opinions of that reviewer: This is boring. Too many segments, too many characters before anything becomes interesting. Please feel free to file another complaint on Twitter. Spam is not the same as "disagrees with you." |
J flood chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 if you can't grab your readers attention within the first chapter you shouldn't write |
J flood chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 welcome to Total Drama Island |